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Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chengdong Han for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen

From: 韩成栋 <chdhan AT impcas.ac.cn>
To: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
Cc: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chengdong Han for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2023 12:28:23 +0800 (GMT+08:00)

Dear Subhash,

Thank you very much for your review and suggestions, I have revised the draft
according to these suggestions.
Please Kindly find the updated report by the link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64787

Also find my some reply below:
#4: high baryon chemical potential
Answer s#4: Done, change the “high chemical potential” to “high baryon
density”.

#5: could you rephrase the 2nd bullet? What do you mean by "two differential
images”?
Answer s#5: I remove this sentence according to Sooraj suggestions

#7: Events --> Is it no. of good/analyzed events? Please make sure these
numbers are consistent with others.
Answer s#7: Yes, it is the number of good/analyzed events after the events
cuts (Including Bad run, Tigger Id, PV and Centrality 0-80% cut).

#7:TPC-AB, EPD-CD ... will not be understood by audience outside STAR, please
indicate eta ranges for reach regions in the slide.
Answer s#7: Yes, I add the eta range in the figure of EP Resolution R1 vs.
centrality.

Thank you for your attention.

Best wishes,

Chengdong Han

> -----Original Messages-----
> From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Sent Time: 2023-08-28 15:14:31 (Monday)
> To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Cc: "韩成栋" <chdhan AT impcas.ac.cn>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chengdong Han for Quark
Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
>
> Dear Chengdong,
>
> Very nice slides. I also have a few additional suggestions for your
> consideration:
>
> s#4: high baryon chemical potential
>
> s#5: "which is considered to be a sensitive observation quantity for
> studying EoS;" --> which is a sensitive observable for studying EoS;
> could you rephrase the 2nd bullet? What do you mean by "two differential
> images"?
>
> s#7: table top row: 2018 3.0 GeV (3.59 A GeV) --> 3.0 GeV (3.59 A
GeV)
> (2018)
> Events --> Is it no. of good/analyzed events? Please make sure these
> numbers are consistent with others.
>
> TPC-AB, EPD-CD ... will not be understood by audience outside STAR,
> please indicate eta ranges for reach regions in the slide.
>
> s#10: "where p0, which stands for the..." --> where p0 is the ...
>
> At given energy, for both light- and hyper-nuclei, it seems that the
> slopes of mid-rapidity v1 are scaled with atomic mass number A or/and
> particle mass;
>
> s#12: Correct the typo: "mean field" (also in next slides)
> .... calculations are consistent ...
>
> s#14: 2nd bullet, how about: <pt> of light and hyper-nuclei: both data
> and model show similar the mass dependence
>
> s#15: First observation --> Observation
> It implies coalescence as dominant mechanism for nuclei formation
>
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2023-08-23 03:25 PM, 韩成栋 via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear Zhenyu
> >
> > Many thanks for your kind comments.
> > I have implemented them with your suggestions into my slides.
> > Please kindly find the updated report by the link:
> >
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR
> >
> >
> > Thank you for your attention.
> >
> > Best wishes,
> >
> > Chengdong Han
> >
> >
> >
> > > -----Original Messages-----
> > > From: "webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > Sent Time: 2023-08-22 12:06:21 (Tuesday)
> > > To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > Cc: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > Subject: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xionghong He for
Quark
> > Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
> > >
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a
material
> > originally
> > > submitted by Xionghong He ( hexh AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
> > >
> >
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR
> > >
> > > Comment:
> > > Dear Chengdong,
> > >
> > > Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
> > > - General: please try to keep title of each slide at the same
> > position and
> > > same font size
> > > - Slide2: mass and energy dependence -> mass and energy
> > dependence of v_1
> > > - Slide2: v_2 results -> v_2
> > > - Slide3: remove the ":" after "scan"
> > > - Slide4: bullet point 1), "high density" or high chemical
> > potential?
> > > - Slide5: size of v_n -> magnitude of v_n
> > > - Slide5: observed flow coefficients -> observed flow
> > coefficients v_n^R
> > > - Slide5: corrected -> correct
> > > - Slide6: enlarge -> enlarged; improve -> improved;
enhance
> > -> enhanced
> > > - Slide7: centrality cut table is not needed; the references
> > refer to star
> > > internal files should not be there; re-centering ->
re-center;
> > three
> > > sub-events method, I would suggest to provide the equation
> > > - Slide8: errors -> uncertainties; help us to -> help us
on
> > > - Slide9: add few words on the key points you want to deliver
from
> > this
> > > slide; what are the yellow boxes in acceptance plots?
> > > - Slide10: add few words
> > > - Slide14: I did not get the meaning of this sentence "Light-
and
> > > Hyper-nuclei, as well as ..."
> > > - Slide15: particle mass -> particles' mass; dominant ->
> > dominating
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Zhenyu
> > >
> > >
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