STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[韩成栋 <chdhan AT impcas.ac.cn>]

Dear Zhenyu

Many thanks for your kind comments.
I have implemented them with your suggestions into my slides.
Please kindly find the updated report by the link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR


Thank you for your attention.

Best wishes,

Chengdong Han



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&gt; Subject: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xionghong He for Quark Matter 
2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
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&gt; Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
&gt; 
&gt; Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
originally  
&gt; submitted by Xionghong He ( hexh AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
&gt; 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR
&gt; 
&gt; Comment:
&gt; Dear Chengdong,
&gt; 
&gt; Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
&gt; - General: please try to keep title of each slide at the same position 
and  
&gt; same font size
&gt; - Slide2: mass and energy dependence -&gt; mass and energy dependence of 
v_1
&gt; - Slide2: v_2 results -&gt; v_2
&gt; - Slide3: remove the ":" after "scan"
&gt; - Slide4: bullet point 1), "high density" or high chemical potential?
&gt; - Slide5: size of v_n -&gt; magnitude of v_n
&gt; - Slide5: observed flow coefficients -&gt; observed flow coefficients 
v_n^R
&gt; - Slide5: corrected -&gt; correct
&gt; - Slide6: enlarge -&gt; enlarged; improve -&gt; improved; enhance -&gt; 
enhanced
&gt; - Slide7: centrality cut table is not needed; the references refer to 
star  
&gt; internal files should not be there; re-centering -&gt; re-center; three  
&gt; sub-events method, I would suggest to provide the equation
&gt; - Slide8: errors -&gt; uncertainties; help us to -&gt; help us on
&gt; - Slide9: add few words on the key points you want to deliver from this  
&gt; slide; what are the yellow boxes in acceptance plots?
&gt; - Slide10: add few words
&gt; - Slide14: I did not get the meaning of this sentence "Light- and  
&gt; Hyper-nuclei, as well as ..."
&gt; - Slide15: particle mass -&gt; particles' mass; dominant -&gt; dominating
&gt; 
&gt; Cheers,
&gt; Zhenyu
&gt; 
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