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Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Xionghong He ( hexh AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR

Comment:
Dear Chengdong,

Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
- General: please try to keep title of each slide at the same position and  
same font size
- Slide2: mass and energy dependence -> mass and energy dependence of v_1
- Slide2: v_2 results -> v_2
- Slide3: remove the ":" after "scan"
- Slide4: bullet point 1), "high density" or high chemical potential?
- Slide5: size of v_n -> magnitude of v_n
- Slide5: observed flow coefficients -> observed flow coefficients v_n^R
- Slide5: corrected -> correct
- Slide6: enlarge -> enlarged; improve -> improved; enhance -> enhanced
- Slide7: centrality cut table is not needed; the references refer to star  
internal files should not be there; re-centering -> re-center; three  
sub-events method, I would suggest to provide the equation
- Slide8: errors -> uncertainties; help us to -> help us on
- Slide9: add few words on the key points you want to deliver from this  
slide; what are the yellow boxes in acceptance plots?
- Slide10: add few words
- Slide14: I did not get the meaning of this sentence "Light- and  
Hyper-nuclei, as well as ..."
- Slide15: particle mass -> particles' mass; dominant -> dominating

Cheers,
Zhenyu


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