STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Duckworth, Emilie" <educkwor AT kent.edu>]

Hello Grazyna, 

I have addressed the issues you brought up. Please see the updated submission.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Directed-Flow-Protons-and-Anti-Protons-RHIC-Beam-Energy-Scan-II-0

Emmy

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Cc: Grazyna Odyniec <g_odyniec AT lbl.gov>
Subject: EXT: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Eddie (Emmy) Duckworth for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Eddie,

I was asked by STAR management to review a few posters for QM, and yours
is one of them.

Here are my comments for your consideration.

First of all – congratulations on the very nice and clear poster. Well done!

A few (minor) remarks follow:

Abstract

Line 4:

Net proton -> net-proton

Line 4-5:

You definitely need to say that this non-monotonic behavior (from BES-I
data) is observed at mid-rapidity. It is important, because you are
talking about contribution of the transported quarks to mid-y

Line-6:

 From STAR -> from STAR experiment (or even better -> from STAR
experiment at RHIC)

Summary slide:

References for both JAM model versions would be useful. You can put them
on the figure directly or into the “References” (left bottom)


The figure with Excess shows for the first time the centrality range of
Au+Au collisions in your analysis. I would suggest mentioning this
earlier, for example you could do it in the Abstract in line 5:

We will present measurements of the directed flow of protons and
antiprotons from 19.6, 14.5, and 7.7 GeV Au+Au collisions, using …

->

We will present measurements of the directed flow of protons and
antiprotons collision from 19.6, 14.5, and 7.7 GeV semi-central (10-40%)
Au+Au collisions, using …


Best regards,

Grazyna Odyniec / LBNL


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