STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Grazyna Odyniec <g_odyniec AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Eddie,

I was asked by STAR management to review a few posters for QM, and yours 
is one of them.

Here are my comments for your consideration.

First of all – congratulations on the very nice and clear poster. Well done!

A few (minor) remarks follow:

Abstract

Line 4:

Net proton -> net-proton

Line 4-5:

You definitely need to say that this non-monotonic behavior (from BES-I 
data) is observed at mid-rapidity. It is important, because you are 
talking about contribution of the transported quarks to mid-y

Line-6:

From STAR -> from STAR experiment (or even better -> from STAR 
experiment at RHIC)

Summary slide:

References for both JAM model versions would be useful. You can put them 
on the figure directly or into the “References” (left bottom)


The figure with Excess shows for the first time the centrality range of 
Au+Au collisions in your analysis. I would suggest mentioning this 
earlier, for example you could do it in the Abstract in line 5:

We will present measurements of the directed flow of protons and 
antiprotons from 19.6, 14.5, and 7.7 GeV Au+Au collisions, using …

->

We will present measurements of the directed flow of protons and 
antiprotons collision from 19.6, 14.5, and 7.7 GeV semi-central (10-40%) 
Au+Au collisions, using …


Best regards,

Grazyna Odyniec / LBNL


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