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Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Sharang Rav Sharma for ISMD 2023 submitted for review
- From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
- To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Sharang Rav Sharma for ISMD 2023 submitted for review
- Date: Wed, 22 Nov 2023 21:17:30 +0800
Dear Sharang,
Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions below for your consideration:
l#10: at s_NN = 3.2, ...
l#11, 12: for identified hadrons (pi, K, p) and net-particles (net K and net p) ....
l#13, 14: The minimum in v1 slope for net-kaon is observed at lower collision energy than net-proton
--> I think we don't have sufficient data to comment about the minimum. You can probably say that the sign change occurred at different energy.
l#18: "The v3 slope for all particles decreases in magnitude with increasing collision energy, indicating the effect of the mean-field at the low energies."
--> How mean field connected to energy dependence, can you explain? There could be multiple effects folded in here mean-field, baryon stopping, geometry, ... right?
l#51, 55 and else where add a space X ~ GeV
l#59: remove bracket on \kappa
l#61,62: add a reference
l#66: The traditional v3, ...
l#77: In these proceedings,
l#88-93: You could mention the kinematics, pt, eta selections and track selection conditions before introducing particle identification.
l#93: I guess you are not using z-variable for all species, only for light nuclei. For other species you are using combination with Nsigma. So modify the discussions accordingly.
l#113: You could mention what is used as weight in Q reconstruction
l#130: employed in the collider BES-I
l#141, 142: you can add model comparison or a reference for backing up the statement
l#155: linear term in a third-order polynomial, right?
l#160: Suggest to change the statement that we observe a sign change than observe a minima, as mentioned above. Also make a similar change in the conclusion.
l#172, 173: modify the statement that it is not solely from mean-field. Also make a similar change in the conclusion.
Thanks and regards,
Subhash
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