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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Yicheng Feng ( feng216 AT purdue.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Evidence-Possible-Chiral-Magnetic-Effect-AuAu-Collisions-200-GeV-Rel

Comment:
Nice abstract!!  I sign off with the following comments.

Title:
"Evidence of Possible" --> "Investigating Potential Evidence"

"the combination of these measurements eliminates"
--> "the combination of these measurements mitigate"


for this part "... in a phase space different from that of particles of  
interest"
seems a bit incomplete, can you add something along why it's any good?


"We report evidence of a possible CME signal"
-->
how about:
"We report measurement suggestive of CME signal"
or better:
"We report CME signal with a significance of 3.4"

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