STAR HardProbes PWG

[Monika Robotková <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Hello Nihar,

Thank you for your useful comments, I've implemented them and uploaded v2 on Drupal page.

Best regards,

Monika

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: 23. června 2022 12:58:10
Komu: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov; STAR HardProbes PWG
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for ICHEP 2022 submitted for review

 

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments below on your nice poster.

It is advised to follow the guidance set by IUPAC while using symbols in
scientific text:
https://iupac.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/01/ICTNS-On-the-use-of-italic-and-roman-fonts-for-symbols-in-scientific-text.pdf
Note:
it should be written as $p$+$p$ and $p$+Au, etc, which is different from
the guidance. 

For example:
pT,jet -> $p_{\rm T,jet}$ (here p represents momentum and it has value
so is italic; whereas "T,jet" is a label and no value so "roman")
Similarly please correct for z_g -> $z_{\rm g}$ and R_g -> $R_{\rm g}$
Detailed can be found in the above link.

In Abstract:
"…(Rg) and the QCD splitting…" -> "…(Rg), and the QCD splitting…"
"…second and third splits…" -> …second, and third splits…"

In Motivation:
_ Please make sure there is no extra space between words; may be due to
alignment.
_"…experimentally robust observables" -> "… robust observables."
(Observables are measured experimentally)
_ "Two ways how to study the parton shower: " - > "Two ways to study the
parton shower:"

In SoftDrop:
_Please use two bullets for "Grooming…" and "Connects…"
_Define  z_cut, pT,1,2, theta and beta
_Introduce and define R_g here

Correlation between observes at the first split:
_Please use bullets for each items
_Define pT,jet

First, second, and third split:
_You need to introduce or show a cartoon to explain what are these
First, second, and third splits are
_Please use bullets for each items

Conclusion:
_Please use bullets for each items
_"Selecting on the split number as we move along the jet shower mimics
the same observation selecting on Rg at the first split"
-> can you please paraphrase this sentence? Not clear.


Regards,
Nihar



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