STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Thank you for implementing my comment. I have no further comments and 
sign off.
Please wait for other conveners to comment.

Regards
Nihar


On 2022-06-24 04:41, Monika Robotková wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>
> Thank you for your useful comments, I've implemented them and uploaded
> v2 on Drupal page.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Monika
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>
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> Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: 23. června 2022 12:58:10
> Komu: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov; STAR HardProbes PWG
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> ICHEP 2022 submitted for review
>
> Hello Monika,
>
> Please find my comments below on your nice poster.
>
> It is advised to follow the guidance set by IUPAC while using symbols
> in
> scientific text:
> https://iupac.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/01/ICTNS-On-the-use-of-italic-and-roman-fonts-for-symbols-in-scientific-text.pdf
> 
Note:
> [1]
> it should be written as $p$+$p$ and $p$+Au, etc, which is different
> from
> the guidance.
>
> For example:
> pT,jet -> $p_{\rm T,jet}$ (here p represents momentum and it has value
>
> so is italic; whereas "T,jet" is a label and no value so "roman")
> Similarly please correct for z_g -> $z_{\rm g}$ and R_g -> $R_{\rm g}$
> Detailed can be found in the above link.
>
> In Abstract:
> "…(Rg) and the QCD splitting…" -> "…(Rg), and the QCD
> splitting…"
> "…second and third splits…" -> …second, and third splits…"
>
> In Motivation:
> _ Please make sure there is no extra space between words; may be due
> to
> alignment.
> _"…experimentally robust observables" -> "… robust observables."
> (Observables are measured experimentally)
> _ "Two ways how to study the parton shower: " - > "Two ways to study
> the
> parton shower:"
>
> In SoftDrop:
> _Please use two bullets for "Grooming…" and "Connects…"
> _Define  z_cut, pT,1,2, theta and beta
> _Introduce and define R_g here
>
> Correlation between observes at the first split:
> _Please use bullets for each items
> _Define pT,jet
>
> First, second, and third split:
> _You need to introduce or show a cartoon to explain what are these
> First, second, and third splits are
> _Please use bullets for each items
>
> Conclusion:
> _Please use bullets for each items
> _"Selecting on the split number as we move along the jet shower mimics
>
> the same observation selecting on Rg at the first split"
> -> can you please paraphrase this sentence? Not clear.
>
> Regards,
> Nihar
>
> On 2022-06-22 17:41, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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