STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Rachael,

We note that you have requested for hp-pwg presentation next week, so 
please prepare for that.
Due to limited time we can go ahead with this abstract without a 
showstopper.
We will decide the result/plots be shown at DNP later.

Please find my comments on your nice abstract below.

1_ Title:
"Toward a …Channel" -> "Toward a …Channel in $p$+$p$ collisions at 
$\sqrt s $ = 200 GeV in the STAR experiment"

2_ "Rachael Botsford" -> "Rachael Botsford (for the STAR collaboration)"

3_ "with their own anti-quarks…" -> "with their anti-quarks…"

4_ "This analysis will measure J/Ψ pT spectra and yield as a function of 
multiplicity in proton-proton …"
->
"In this measurement, the J/Ψ pT spectra and yield as a function of 
multiplicity are measured in proton-proton …"

5_ As "TPC", "TOF", and "BEMC" are not used in the next sentences, so 
you can drop those abbreviations.

6_ "…including J/Ψ invariant mass plots and plots related to electron 
and muon identification in the STAR detector." -> "... including J/Ψ 
invariant mass distributions and the methods for electron and muon 
identification using the STAR detector."


Regards,
Nihar

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