STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tristan.

I request you to present your this new analysis regularly in HP-pwg.

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

L6: "...Early in the collision evolution,…" -> "...Early in the 
collision,…"
L7: "…     will produces …" -> "produces" ;
       "…the QGP,.." -> "…the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP),…"
L8: "…fragment and hadronize to form a collimated collection of final 
state particle." -> …fragment, and hadronize to form a collimated spray 
of final state particle."
L9-10: "…collisional  and radiative processes." -> "…collisional and 
radiative energy loss."
L10: observables, including -> observables including
L11: "Another approach to measuring jet quenching effects is to 
determine the anisotropy of the distribution of jets…" This is 
inaccurate, generally we don't measure jet v2 to study directly 
jet-quenching effect rather it is the manifestation of jet-medium 
interaction which gives jet-quenching effect and jet anisotropy. So it 
needs some modification, Please rephrase this.
Something like " The jet anisotropy measurement with respect to the 
event plane sheds light on the jet-medium interaction in heavy-ion 
collisions."
L13: "…elliptical shape of the QGP " -> "…elliptical shape of the 
initial geometry …"
L14: "…expect to measure more jets …" -> "…expect more jets…"
L15: need to define  v_2^{jet} and v_2^{ch jet}
L16: "…using track jets …" -> "…using charged jets.."
L17: " system, which are isobars of each other. " -> "…system."  Rest is 
not needed.

Cheers
Nihar

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