STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Thank you and other PAs for preparing this nice merged abstract.

Line#13: ...framework called MultiFold, with... -> ...framework, called 
Multifold, with..."

Line#15-18: Can we break this sentence into two? Suggestion:
"...re-contextualizes jet substructure study by..." -> 
"...re-contextualizes the jet substructure measurement. This observable 
provides insight into the parton evolution from perturbative to 
non-perturbative QCD regime by measuring the distribution of angular 
distance of all combinations of two final state particles within a jet."

Line#20: "...jets of varying momenta and radii and fully corrected 
EEC..." -> "...jets of varying momenta and radii, and fully corrected 
EEC..."

Line#25: "...PYTHIA 6, PYTHIA 8 ..." -> PYTHIA-6, PYTHIA-8

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-01-31 16:30, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Monika,
> I don't have comments on your nice abstract and sign off.
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Mon, Jan 30, 2023 at 11:19 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
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