STAR HardProbes PWG

[Monika Robotková <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Hello Nihar and Rongrong,

Thank you very much for your useful comments, I've implemented them and uploaded v2 on Drupal page.

Best regards,

Monika

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uľivatele Ma, Rongrong via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: 31. ledna 2023 20:05:21
Komu: nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov; STAR HardProbes PWG
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review

 

Hello Monika

On top of Nihar's comments, I have a few for your consideration:
line 13: across jet substructure observables -> across substructure observables on a jet-by-jet basis (otherwise, it might simply that the 3D correction procedure destroys the correlation)
line 15: do not start with a new paragraph
line 19: In particular, we explore ensemble level -> In this talk, we present both ensemble level

Best
Rongrong


> On Jan 31, 2023, at 7:31 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> Hello Monika,
>
> Thank you and other PAs for preparing this nice merged abstract.
>
> Line#13: ...framework called MultiFold, with... -> ...framework, called Multifold, with..."
>
> Line#15-18: Can we break this sentence into two? Suggestion:
> "...re-contextualizes jet substructure study by..." -> "...re-contextualizes the jet substructure measurement. This observable provides insight into the parton evolution from perturbative to non-perturbative QCD regime by measuring the distribution of angular distance of all combinations of two final state particles within a jet."
>
> Line#20: "...jets of varying momenta and radii and fully corrected EEC..." -> "...jets of varying momenta and radii, and fully corrected EEC..."
>
> Line#25: "...PYTHIA 6, PYTHIA 8 ..." -> PYTHIA-6, PYTHIA-8
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
>
> On 2023-01-31 16:30, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Hi Monika,
>> I don't have comments on your nice abstract and sign off.
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>> On Mon, Jan 30, 2023 at 11:19 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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