STAR HardProbes PWG

["Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika

On top of Nihar's comments, I have a few for your consideration: 
line 13: across jet substructure observables -> across substructure 
observables on a jet-by-jet basis (otherwise, it might simply that the 3D 
correction procedure destroys the correlation)
line 15: do not start with a new paragraph
line 19: In particular, we explore ensemble level -> In this talk, we present 
both ensemble level 

Best
Rongrong


> On Jan 31, 2023, at 7:31 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Hello Monika,
> 
> Thank you and other PAs for preparing this nice merged abstract.
> 
> Line#13: ...framework called MultiFold, with... -> ...framework, called 
> Multifold, with..."
> 
> Line#15-18: Can we break this sentence into two? Suggestion:
> "...re-contextualizes jet substructure study by..." -> 
> "...re-contextualizes the jet substructure measurement. This observable 
> provides insight into the parton evolution from perturbative to 
> non-perturbative QCD regime by measuring the distribution of angular 
> distance of all combinations of two final state particles within a jet."
> 
> Line#20: "...jets of varying momenta and radii and fully corrected EEC..." 
> -> "...jets of varying momenta and radii, and fully corrected EEC..."
> 
> Line#25: "...PYTHIA 6, PYTHIA 8 ..." -> PYTHIA-6, PYTHIA-8
> 
> Cheers
> Nihar
> 
> 
> On 2023-01-31 16:30, Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Hi Monika,
>> I don't have comments on your nice abstract and sign off.
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
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