STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tristan,

Please find my comments on your and Issac's nice merged abstract.

Line#8: "As a jet traverses and interacts with the QGP, it may lose 
energy via collisional and radiative …"
->"As a jet traverses through the QGP medium, it loses energy via 
collisional and radiative processes—known as jet quenching."

Line#10: " ratio of hadron or jet spectra " -> "ratio of hadron or jet 
yields"
Line#14: "…will be presented, with …" -> "…will be presented with …"
Line#18: "… a highly ellipsoidal QGP is produced…" -> "… a highly 
ellipsoidal QGP medium is formed…"
Line#22:"precisely controlled by selecting the eccentricity of an event, 
"  It sounds like experimentally we can select eccentricity of an event 
which I think not the case. We can only select particular geometry of an 
event by event shape engineering. Is not that? If yes, please rephrase 
this sentence.

Cheers
Nihar

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