STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tristan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-02-02 01:53, Tristan Protzman wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thanks for the comments.  I implemented all suggested changes.
>
> Line#22:"precisely controlled by selecting the eccentricity of an
> event,
> "  It sounds like experimentally we can select eccentricity of an
> event
> which I think not the case. We can only select particular geometry of
> an
> event by event shape engineering. Is not that? If yes, please rephrase
> this sentence.
>
> I changed the sentence to say we select the initial geometry of the
> event, rather than the eccentricity.  I think this is accurate in line
> with what you are suggesting.
>
> Cheers,
> Tristan
>
> On Wed, Feb 1, 2023 at 8:10 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Tristan,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your and Issac's nice merged abstract.
> >
> > Line#8: "As a jet traverses and interacts with the QGP, it may lose
> > energy via collisional and radiative …"
> > ->"As a jet traverses through the QGP medium, it loses energy via
> > collisional and radiative processes—known as jet quenching."
> >
> > Line#10: " ratio of hadron or jet spectra " -> "ratio of hadron or
> > jet
> > yields"
> > Line#14: "…will be presented, with …" -> "…will be presented
> > with …"
> > Line#18: "… a highly ellipsoidal QGP is produced…" -> "… a
> > highly
> > ellipsoidal QGP medium is formed…"
> > Line#22:"precisely controlled by selecting the eccentricity of an
> > event,
> > "  It sounds like experimentally we can select eccentricity of an
> > event
> > which I think not the case. We can only select particular geometry
> > of an
> > event by event shape engineering. Is not that? If yes, please
> > rephrase
> > this sentence.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-01-31 20:22, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Tristan Protzman (tlp220 AT lehigh.edu) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
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> > >
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