STAR HardProbes PWG

[Tristan Protzman <tlp220 AT lehigh.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for the comments.  I implemented all suggested changes.

Line#22:"precisely controlled by selecting the eccentricity of an event,
"  It sounds like experimentally we can select eccentricity of an event
which I think not the case. We can only select particular geometry of an
event by event shape engineering. Is not that? If yes, please rephrase
this sentence.

I changed the sentence to say we select the initial geometry of the event, rather than the eccentricity.  I think this is accurate in line with what you are suggesting.

Cheers,

Tristan

On Wed, Feb 1, 2023 at 8:10 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Tristan,

Please find my comments on your and Issac's nice merged abstract.

Line#8: "As a jet traverses and interacts with the QGP, it may lose
energy via collisional and radiative …"
->"As a jet traverses through the QGP medium, it loses energy via
collisional and radiative processes—known as jet quenching."

Line#10: " ratio of hadron or jet spectra " -> "ratio of hadron or jet
yields"
Line#14: "…will be presented, with …" -> "…will be presented with …"
Line#18: "… a highly ellipsoidal QGP is produced…" -> "… a highly
ellipsoidal QGP medium is formed…"
Line#22:"precisely controlled by selecting the eccentricity of an event,
"  It sounds like experimentally we can select eccentricity of an event
which I think not the case. We can only select particular geometry of an
event by event shape engineering. Is not that? If yes, please rephrase
this sentence.

Cheers
Nihar

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