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[gaohan_yang <gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>]

Hello Yi,

Thanks for the suggestion. I've uploaded a new version. Please have a look.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ATHIC2023_Gaohan_V3.pdf

Best,

Gaohan

	gaohan_yang
gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn

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From Yi Yang<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> Date 2/4/2023 10:56 To gaohan_yang<gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> ,
STAR HardProbes PWG<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> Cc barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> ,
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webmaster AT star.bnl.gov<webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> Subject Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Gaohan Yang for ATHIC 2023 submitted for review

Dear Gaohan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. 

I have some minor suggestions for your consideration. 

L1: Title: at top RHIC energy --> at the top RHIC energy 

L10: Upsilon --> $\upsilon$

L12: force --> interaction 

L14: remove "final" 

L16: factor --> factors 

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, Feb 4, 2023 at 3:39 AM gaohan_yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Barbara and Nihar,

Thank you very much for your patience and useful comments, I've implemented them and uploaded v2 on the Drupal page which can be found in this link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ATHIC2023_Gaohan_V2.pdf

On top of that, for the analysis of Upsilon production in isobar collisions. I have already finished efficiency correction and raw yield calculated. Systematic uncertainty estimate and Raa calculation are in progress. Maybe I can update my result at the HP meeting next week.

Best,

Gaohan

	gaohan_yang
gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn

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From	Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Date	2/4/2023 00:04
To	Nihar Sahoo<nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> , STAR HardProbes PWG<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Cc	<webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
Subject	Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Gaohan Yang for ATHIC 2023 submitted for review

Hi Gaohan,

please find my comments to your nice abstract below.

And I would like to ask you what are your plans regarding the preliminaries for Upsilon in isobar collisions ? 

- L9: at RHIC -> at the top RHIC

- L10-12: Moreover, different Υ states possess different amounts of binding energies, which are expected to experience different levels of yield suppression in the QGP depending on the interplay between the medium temperature and their binding energies. -> 

Moreover, due to different binding energies, different Upsilon states are expected to dissociate at different temperatures. 

- L15: $Au+Au$ -> Au+Au

- L16: isobaric -> isobaric (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr)

- L16: STAR experiment -> STAR experiment at RHIC

- L18: and pT bins -> and transverse momentum

- L18: The results -> the results

- L19: theoretical calculations -> to theoretical calculations

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 1:49 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gaohan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title:
Measurements -> Measurement
Line-10: "…binding energies, which…" -> "…binding energies which…"
Line-7: "…was proposed to be a direct …" -> "…was proposed as a direct…"
Line-15: "In this talk, we will present…" -> "In this talk, we report…"

Line-16: "isobaric collisions " -> "Isobar collisions";
200GeV -> 200 GeV
with the STAR experiment. -> in the STAR experiment.
pT bins  -> transverse momentum.

Line-17: "…will be presented…" - > "…are presented…"
Line-18:In addition, The results will be also compared… -> In addition,
the results are also compared …at the LHC energy …


Cheers
Nihar




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