STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Gaohan.

Thanks for the update. I sign off with minor comments.

And it would be great if you give an update at the HP meeting. 

L2: STAR Detector -> STAR detector

L11:  suppression for the ->  suppression of the

L15:  Isobar ->  isobar

L17: results are also -> results are

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Feb 6, 2023 at 3:33 AM gaohan_yang <gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hello Nihar,

Thanks a lot for your useful comments. I have updated all your comments in version-4 and removed older versions.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ATHIC2023_Gaohan_V4.pdf

Best,

Gaohan

	gaohan_yang
gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn

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From	Nihar Sahoo<nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
Date	2/5/2023 03:05
To	gaohan_yang<gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>
Cc	<barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> , <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> , <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
Subject	Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Gaohan Yang for ATHIC 2023 submitted for review

Hello Gaohan,

Please find my additional comments on your V3.
With this implemented, I sign off.

Line-10: Moreover, due to different binding energies, different Υ states
are expected to dissociate at different temperatures.
->Moreover, Υ states are expected to dissociate at different
temperatures depending on their binding energy.
(As three "different" in that sentence , so it reads awkward)

LIne-14: we report the results of Υ measurements -> we report the Υ
measurement …
LIne-15: isobaric (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions-> Isobar (Ru+Ru and
Zr+Zr) collisions
Here "Isobaric collisions" has no meaning, only "Isobaric process" has
meaning in thermodynamics; so better to stick with it.

are in progress. Maybe I can update my result at the HP meeting next
week.

Looking forward to seeing updates.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-02-04 01:06, gaohan_yang wrote:

Hello Barbara and Nihar,

Thank you very much for your patience and useful comments, I've
implemented them and uploaded v2 on the Drupal page which can be found
in this link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ATHIC2023_Gaohan_V2.pdf

On top of that, for the analysis of Upsilon production in isobar
collisions. I have already finished efficiency correction and raw
yield calculated. Systematic uncertainty estimate and Raa calculation
are in progress. Maybe I can update my result at the HP meeting next
week.

Best,
Gaohan

gaohan_yang

gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn

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Date
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Subject
Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Gaohan Yang for ATHIC 2023
submitted for review

Hi Gaohan,

please find my comments to your nice abstract below.
And I would like to ask you what are your plans regarding the
preliminaries for Upsilon in isobar collisions ?

- L9: at RHIC -> at the top RHIC
- L10-12: Moreover, different Υ states possess different amounts of
binding energies, which are expected to experience different levels of
yield suppression in the QGP depending on the interplay between the
medium temperature and their binding energies. ->
Moreover, due to different binding energies, different Upsilon states
are expected to dissociate at different temperatures.
- L15: $Au+Au$ -> Au+Au
- L16: isobaric -> isobaric (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr)
- L16: STAR experiment -> STAR experiment at RHIC
- L18: and pT bins -> and transverse momentum
- L18: The results -> the results
- L19: theoretical calculations -> to theoretical calculations

Cheers,
Barbara

On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 1:49 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gaohan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title:
Measurements -> Measurement
Line-10: "…binding energies, which…" -> "…binding energies
which…"
Line-7: "…was proposed to be a direct …" -> "…was proposed as
a direct…"
Line-15: "In this talk, we will present…" -> "In this talk, we
report…"

Line-16: "isobaric collisions " -> "Isobar collisions";
200GeV -> 200 GeV
with the STAR experiment. -> in the STAR experiment.
pT bins  -> transverse momentum.

Line-17: "…will be presented…" - > "…are presented…"
Line-18:In addition, The results will be also compared… -> In
addition,
the results are also compared …at the LHC energy …

Cheers
Nihar

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Gaohan Yang (gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material

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