STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Gaohan,

Please find my additional comments on your V3.
With this implemented, I sign off.

Line-10: Moreover, due to different binding energies, different Υ states 
are expected to dissociate at different temperatures.
->Moreover, Υ states are expected to dissociate at different 
temperatures depending on their binding energy.
(As three "different" in that sentence , so it reads awkward)

LIne-14: we report the results of Υ measurements -> we report the Υ 
measurement …
LIne-15: isobaric (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions-> Isobar (Ru+Ru and 
Zr+Zr) collisions
 Here "Isobaric collisions" has no meaning, only "Isobaric process" has 
meaning in thermodynamics; so better to stick with it.

> are in progress. Maybe I can update my result at the HP meeting next
> week.

Looking forward to seeing updates.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-02-04 01:06, gaohan_yang wrote:
> Hello Barbara and Nihar,
>
> Thank you very much for your patience and useful comments, I've
> implemented them and uploaded v2 on the Drupal page which can be found
> in this link:
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ATHIC2023_Gaohan_V2.pdf
>
> On top of that, for the analysis of Upsilon production in isobar
> collisions. I have already finished efficiency correction and raw
> yield calculated. Systematic uncertainty estimate and Raa calculation
> are in progress. Maybe I can update my result at the HP meeting next
> week.
>
> Best,
> Gaohan
>
> gaohan_yang
>
> gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn
>
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>                  From
>                  Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>
>                  Date
>                  2/4/2023 00:04
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>                  To
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>  STAR HardProbes PWG<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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>                  Subject
>                  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Gaohan Yang for ATHIC 
> 2023
> submitted for review
>
> Hi Gaohan,
>
> please find my comments to your nice abstract below.
> And I would like to ask you what are your plans regarding the
> preliminaries for Upsilon in isobar collisions ?
>
> - L9: at RHIC -> at the top RHIC
> - L10-12: Moreover, different Υ states possess different amounts of
> binding energies, which are expected to experience different levels of
> yield suppression in the QGP depending on the interplay between the
> medium temperature and their binding energies. ->
> Moreover, due to different binding energies, different Upsilon states
> are expected to dissociate at different temperatures.
> - L15: $Au+Au$ -> Au+Au
> - L16: isobaric -> isobaric (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr)
> - L16: STAR experiment -> STAR experiment at RHIC
> - L18: and pT bins -> and transverse momentum
> - L18: The results -> the results
> - L19: theoretical calculations -> to theoretical calculations
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 1:49 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Gaohan,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >
> > Title:
> > Measurements -> Measurement
> > Line-10: "…binding energies, which…" -> "…binding energies
> > which…"
> > Line-7: "…was proposed to be a direct …" -> "…was proposed as
> > a direct…"
> > Line-15: "In this talk, we will present…" -> "In this talk, we
> > report…"
> >
> > Line-16: "isobaric collisions " -> "Isobar collisions";
> > 200GeV -> 200 GeV
> > with the STAR experiment. -> in the STAR experiment.
> > pT bins  -> transverse momentum.
> >
> > Line-17: "…will be presented…" - > "…are presented…"
> > Line-18:In addition, The results will be also compared… -> In
> > addition,
> > the results are also compared …at the LHC energy …
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-02-03 14:16, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Gaohan Yang (gaohan_yang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material
> > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62421
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2023-02-28
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