STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar,

Please see below a few comments on the nice abstract.

- L5-6: The vacuum parton shower converts into a collimated spray of hadrons—known as a jet—in p+p collisions -> (this sentence doesn't read well, maybe something like) Jets are collimated sprays of final-state particles produced from initial hard scatterings of partons in p+p collisions. 

- L10: jet mass, jet charge -> jet mass or jet charge

- L12: Correlator -> Correlator (EEC)

- L19:  In this talk, we plan to present -> In this talk, we present. And I would start a new paragraph here. 

- L19: on these observables -> on ensemble level and jet-by-jet correlations between substructure variables and fully corrected EEC

- L22: On the other hand, we also -> We also

- L20: √s=200 -> √s = 200 (missing spaces), also in L24 and 26

- L25: the nuclear -> the cold nuclear

Cheers,

Barbara

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