STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks a lot for preparing the nice abstract. 

I have some minor comments for your consideration:

  * I would add one sentence somewhere in the first paragraph stating that using p+p and p+Au can provide some information about the initial state (cold nuclear effect). 

  - L5: -- known as a jet -- --> , known as a jet, 

  - L19: In this talk... --> move to the next paragraph 

  - L19: "we plan to present" seems to be a bit odd, suggest to "we present" 

  

Cheers,

Yi

 

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