STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments on your nice presentation slides.

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General comment/suggestion to all HP2023 and DIS2023 presenters:
1. Please make a Drupal page for all your preliminary plots and provide 
us the link.
If you have already done that, please send us the link.

2. While preparing your analysis plots for "STAR preliminary" request, 
please follow the guidance 1-7: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/pwg/common/Preliminary-figures
It saves our time.
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Slide-3:
For groomed mass fraction expression, the denominator one can use "M_g". 
Is not that?
If yes, then it would be good this.

Slide-4:
Right side STAR detector pic, You need to use updated detector with 
forward detectors.
Please mention what is "Jet Patch trigger"? Or just remove it.


 Slide-5:
Title: "Unfolding" -> "Detector effects correction"
…obtain particle-level distribution -> "…true distribution from measured 
one"

SLide-8:
From slide7 to 8, it is not clear what is "Rg vs. dM/M at the first 
split" as title on slide-8?
You need to mention before what is dM/M?
People may not remember what is Mg? You need to mention here again.

Slide-11
Please comment on Slide-3


Cheers
Nihar



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