STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

If you have finish updating your slides (mainly the texts from internal 
discussion) and addressed all comments. Please let us know.


Thank you
Nihar

On 2023-03-23 15:28, Robotkova, Monika wrote:
> Hello Barbara and Yi,
>  Thank you very much very much for your comments, I've implemented
> them and uploaded v4 on Drupal page. I also updated page with
> preliminary plots and preliminary request slides:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/robotmon/Preliminary-figures-Jet-substructure-observables-mu-and-kt.
> Please see my comments below.
>
>  Yi:
>    - p8: I am not sure if it is good to mention "See Youqi's details
> at DIS2023".
>
>  I decided to leave the text on the slide since also Youqi has
> something similar in her slides, but I rephrased it as Barbara
> suggested.
>
>  Barbara:
>  - s28: why do you specifically show systematic uncertainties for z_g
> ?
>
>  It's just an example how our systematics looks like and also the only
> systematics plot with preliminary status from previous presentations.
>
>  Best regards,
>  Monika
>
> -------------------------
>
> Od: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
> Odesláno: středa 22. března 2023 5:12
> Komu: Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
> Kopie: Robotkova, Monika <robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz>; STAR HardProbes PWG
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>; Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>;
> webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Monika,
>
> thanks for the updated slides.
> Please see my remaining minor comments below. And please update your
> preliminary request to the drupal page with your preliminary plots.
>
> - Add the conference logo on the first slide and add the conference
> name to the footer of other slides.
> - s8: The last bullet, you can add "\beta_1,2 = 0, z_cut,2 = 0.1"
> - s8: See Youqi Song’s ... -> More details in Youqi Song’s ..
> - s8, 9, 10: use better resolution plots.
> - s28: why do you specifically show systematic uncertainties for z_g ?
>
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Wed, Mar 22, 2023 at 12:48 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> > Hi Monika,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the updated version. I only have two minor
> > suggestions on v3 for your consideration.
> > - p8, p9: the "boxes (yellow, green, and black)" cover the
> > information on the plot, could you please try thinner line for them?
> >
> > - p8: I am not sure if it is good to mention "See Youqi's details
> > at DIS2023".
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Tue, Mar 21, 2023 at 12:52 PM Robotkova, Monika via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hello Barbara and Nihar,
> > Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and
> > uploaded new version on Drupal page. I also made some minor changes
> > based on rehearsal at our institution.  Link on my preliminary
> > plots:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/robotmon/Preliminary-figures-Jet-substructure-observables-mu-and-kt
> > and preliminary request slides:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/robotmon/Preliminary-figures-request-Multi-dimensional-measurements-jet-substructure-pp-collisi.
> > You can find my comments below.
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Monika
> >
> > Slide-4:
> > Right side STAR detector pic, You need to use updated detector with
> >
> > forward detectors.
> >
> > I decided to put there figure from 2012 when data for our analysis
> > were collected.
> >
> > From slide7 to 8, it is not clear what is "Rg vs. dM/M at the first
> >
> > split" as title on slide-8?
> > You need to mention before what is dM/M?
> >
> > People may not remember what is Mg? You need to mention here again.
> >
> > I have the cartoon on the right and also the definition of dM, so I
> > think it is sufficient to explain it by words. I also added
> > Collinear drop on this slide.
> >
> > -------------------------
> >
> > Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele
> > Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Odesláno: pátek 17. března 2023 8:24
> > Komu: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>; STAR HardProbes PWG
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Kopie: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> > Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> > Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Monika,
> >
> > Thanks for the nice slides with a good story.
> > My comments are below.
> >
> > - Add the STAR logo on the title page.
> > - s4: the STAR figure is a bit small. Try to make the text around
> > it, or just zoom on the detectors that are of interest here.
> > - s8: it's nice to advertise Youqi's talk. But it's a different
> > conference and you present here some of the results.
> > It would be therefore good to briefly introduce the Collinear Drop,
> > you can do this on s8.
> > - s9: you don't need "and dM/M for different Rg" in the title.
> > - s11, 13: remove "for two different pT,jet bins" from the title.
> > - s16: try to increase the size of the plots.
> > - s17: I suggest having the last two summary statements in different
> > colours.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Barbara
> >
> > On Fri, Mar 17, 2023 at 1:18 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Hello Monika,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice presentation slides.
> >
> > ___________
> > General comment/suggestion to all HP2023 and DIS2023 presenters:
> > 1. Please make a Drupal page for all your preliminary plots and
> > provide
> > us the link.
> > If you have already done that, please send us the link.
> >
> > 2. While preparing your analysis plots for "STAR preliminary"
> > request,
> > please follow the guidance 1-7:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/pwg/common/Preliminary-figures
> > It saves our time.
> > _________
> >
> > Slide-3:
> > For groomed mass fraction expression, the denominator one can use
> > "M_g".
> > Is not that?
> > If yes, then it would be good this.
> >
> > Slide-4:
> > Right side STAR detector pic, You need to use updated detector with
> > forward detectors.
> > Please mention what is "Jet Patch trigger"? Or just remove it.
> >
> > Slide-5:
> > Title: "Unfolding" -> "Detector effects correction"
> > …obtain particle-level distribution -> "…true distribution from
> > measured
> > one"
> >
> > SLide-8:
> > From slide7 to 8, it is not clear what is "Rg vs. dM/M at the first
> >
> > split" as title on slide-8?
> > You need to mention before what is dM/M?
> > People may not remember what is Mg? You need to mention here again.
> >
> > Slide-11
> > Please comment on Slide-3
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-03-17 16:03, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
> > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63008 [1]
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2023-03-26
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