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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Monika,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I only have two minor suggestions on v3 for your consideration. 

  - p8, p9: the "boxes (yellow, green, and black)" cover the information on the plot, could you please try thinner line for them? 

  - p8: I am not sure if it is good to mention "See Youqi's details at DIS2023". 

   

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Mar 21, 2023 at 12:52 PM Robotkova, Monika via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Barbara and Nihar,

Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and uploaded new version on Drupal page. I also made some minor changes based on rehearsal at our institution.  Link on my preliminary plots: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/robotmon/Preliminary-figures-Jet-substructure-observables-mu-and-kt and preliminary request slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/robotmon/Preliminary-figures-request-Multi-dimensional-measurements-jet-substructure-pp-collisi. You can find my comments below.

Best regards,

Monika

Slide-4:
Right side STAR detector pic, You need to use updated detector with

forward detectors.

I decided to put there figure from 2012 when data for our analysis were collected.

From slide7 to 8, it is not clear what is "Rg vs. dM/M at the first

split" as title on slide-8?
You need to mention before what is dM/M?

People may not remember what is Mg? You need to mention here again.

I have the cartoon on the right and also the definition of dM, so I think it is sufficient to explain it by words. I also added Collinear drop on this slide.

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Od: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> za uživatele Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Odesláno: pátek 17. března 2023 8:24
Komu: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>; STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review

 

Hi Monika,

Thanks for the nice slides with a good story. 

My comments are below.

- Add the STAR logo on the title page.

- s4: the STAR figure is a bit small. Try to make the text around it, or just zoom on the detectors that are of interest here. 

- s8: it's nice to advertise Youqi's talk. But it's a different conference and you present here some of the results. 

It would be therefore good to briefly introduce the Collinear Drop, you can do this on s8.

- s9: you don't need "and dM/M for different Rg" in the title.

- s11, 13: remove "for two different pT,jet bins" from the title.

- s16: try to increase the size of the plots.

- s17: I suggest having the last two summary statements in different colours. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Mar 17, 2023 at 1:18 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments on your nice presentation slides.

___________
General comment/suggestion to all HP2023 and DIS2023 presenters:
1. Please make a Drupal page for all your preliminary plots and provide
us the link.
If you have already done that, please send us the link.

2. While preparing your analysis plots for "STAR preliminary" request,
please follow the guidance 1-7:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/pwg/common/Preliminary-figures
It saves our time.
_________

Slide-3:
For groomed mass fraction _expression_, the denominator one can use "M_g".
Is not that?
If yes, then it would be good this.

Slide-4:
Right side STAR detector pic, You need to use updated detector with
forward detectors.
Please mention what is "Jet Patch trigger"? Or just remove it.


  Slide-5:
Title: "Unfolding" -> "Detector effects correction"
…obtain particle-level distribution -> "…true distribution from measured
one"

SLide-8:
 From slide7 to 8, it is not clear what is "Rg vs. dM/M at the first
split" as title on slide-8?
You need to mention before what is dM/M?
People may not remember what is Mg? You need to mention here again.

Slide-11
Please comment on Slide-3


Cheers
Nihar



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