STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Veronika,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract below.

Title: measurements -> measurement
Line4: "…collisions, where …" -> "…collisions where …"
Line 7: "…Flavor Electrons (HFE), which are electrons …" -> "…Flavor 
Electrons (HFE)--electrons …" (use em dash instead)
Line 9-10: "…heavy-flavor electrons (HFE) in …" -> " …HFE  in …"
Line12: "(Rcp)" drops it, not needed.

Cheers
Nihar






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