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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Veronika,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract for the poster. 

I have some minor comments for your consideration: 

 - L9: low-pT --> low transverse momentum (pT) 

 - L12: transverse momentum --> pT

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, Apr 22, 2023 at 8:58 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Veronika,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-22 02:55, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Veronika,
>
> thanks for the update. I sign off.
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 1:20 PM Veronika Prozorova
> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Barbara,
>>
>> Thank you very much for your comment. I have implemented it. Please,
>> find the new version here:
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterAbstractQM2023_Prozorova_v4.pdf
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Veronika
>>
>> чт, 20 апр. 2023 г. в 11:56, Barbara Trzeciak
>> <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>:
>>
>> Hi Veronika,
>>
>> I have a minor comment on your nice abstract.
>>
>> L9: a study of HFE -> a study of low-p_T HFE
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 9:26 PM Veronika Prozorova via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>> Dear Nihar,
>>
>> Thank you very much for your comments. Please find the new version
>> here:
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterAbstractQM2023_Prozorova_v3.pdf
>>
>> Best regards,
>> Veronika
>>
>> ср, 19 апр. 2023 г. в 15:58, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:
>> Hello Veronika,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract below.
>>
>> Title: measurements -> measurement
>> Line4: "…collisions, where …" -> "…collisions where …"
>> Line 7: "…Flavor Electrons (HFE), which are electrons …" ->
>> "…Flavor
>> Electrons (HFE)--electrons …" (use em dash instead)
>> Line 9-10: "…heavy-flavor electrons (HFE) in …" -> " …HFE  in
>> …"
>> Line12: "(Rcp)" drops it, not needed.
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
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