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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Veronika,

I have a minor comment on your nice abstract.

L9: a study of HFE -> a study of low-p_T HFE 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 9:26 PM Veronika Prozorova via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Nihar,

Thank you very much for your comments. Please find the new version here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/PosterAbstractQM2023_Prozorova_v3.pdf

Best regards,

Veronika

ср, 19 апр. 2023 г. в 15:58, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Hello Veronika,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract below.

Title: measurements -> measurement
Line4: "…collisions, where …" -> "…collisions where …"
Line 7: "…Flavor Electrons (HFE), which are electrons …" -> "…Flavor
Electrons (HFE)--electrons …" (use em dash instead)
Line 9-10: "…heavy-flavor electrons (HFE) in …" -> " …HFE  in …"
Line12: "(Rcp)" drops it, not needed.

Cheers
Nihar






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