STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tanmay,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title : How about?
Measurement of jet modifications of momentum profile and generalized 
angularities in Au+Au collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV at STAR
L1-4: You can concise it. for QM conf, everyone knows jet-quenching and 
QGP.
L4-6:   this sentence needs work. Can you please try again?
L11: in presence of medium …in LHC -> in presence of the medium … at the 
LHC.
L11-15: thess sentences need some work.
L16-17: "	we present the first, fully corrected for detector-smearing, 
measurements of …" -> "…we present the first measurment of fully 
corrected 	ρ(r), g, pDT and LeSub observables …"
L19-20: using a p + p collision baseline.  -> relative to p+p collisions 
baseline.
L20-21: "The effect of soft-radiation has been probed by comparing with 
calculations  using SoftDrop groomed jets. " is that true? We have not 
discussed this in your QM2023 status presentation yesterday. Have I 
missed here?
L21-22: 	"The observations have been compared with state-of-art  Monte 
Carlo simulations and calculations. " -> "Finally, the data are compared 
with the Monte Carlo models and the implications are discussed. "

Cheers
Nihar

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