STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Veronica,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I only have some follow up suggestions for your consideration. 

 - L37: I wanted to say removing "cold nuclear matter", but I typed CNM. Please use CNM here. Sorry about that. 

 - L71: I would use "showing clear CNM effect at low-pT".

 - L105: I understand there is a page limitation, but I would suggest putting the "clear CNM effect at low-pT for J/psi" in the conclusion. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, May 13, 2023 at 4:56 AM Veronica Verkest <vverkest AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi all,

Yi –– I appreciate all the helpful feedback! I have implemented all of your changes and I have also changed the acknowledgements section to be more specific.

I have uploaded this slightly revised version so that Nihar and Isaac can look it over at their convenience. There is a 4 page limit, so we cannot add quite too much more content anyway.

Thanks,

Veronica

On Fri, May 12, 2023 at 3:38 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:

Dear Veronica,

Thank you so much for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L24: Fig. 1 --> Figure 1 

 - L36: remove (CNM) 

 - L43: image --> plot 

 - L44: high-E_T --> high-transverse-energy (high-E_T)

 - L52: image --> plot

 - L54: p_T --> transverse momentum (pT)

 - Figure 3 actually indicates that CNM is observed at low pT < 3 GeV region and it should be mentioned in the text.  

 - L73: the description of the nuclear modification factor should move up to around L62, before talking about the RpA for J/psi. 

 - L75: image --> plot

 - L75: jets --> J/psi

 - L77: need to define Npart 

 - Figure 4: The left plot is RAA for J/psi, should be mentioned in the caption. 

 - L79: since you specifically describe Upsilon here, should you describe J/psi as well somewhere before it? 

 - L81: image --> plot

 - L90: Fig. 5 --> Figure 5

 - L104: should mention J/psi here 

Cheers,

Yi

 

On Sat, May 13, 2023 at 12:26 AM Veronica Verkest via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi all,

In the hustle of recent submissions, I just wanted to send a reminder about my Moriond proceedings (here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63649). The due date is the 15th, which is Monday. I welcome and appreciate any feedback!

Thanks,

Veronica

On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 7:36 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Veronica Verkest (vverkest AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63649

Deadline: 2023-03-25
---
If you have any problems with the review process, please contact 
webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov
_______________________________________________
Star-hp-l mailing list
Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l

_______________________________________________
Star-hp-l mailing list
Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-hp-l