STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Barbara,

Please find my comments on your nice quarkonia overview slides.

Title:
"Recent quarkonium…" -> "Recent quarkonia…"  [Becasue you present J/psi 
and Upsilon results; it is up to you.]

SLide2:
_color screening, regeneration. -> color screening and regeneration.
_co-mover absorption, ... .  -> "co-mover absorption, etc. " or 
"co-mover absorption, …"

Slide3:
time of flight, PID (1/β) -> time-of-flight (1/β) and PID  [ 1/beta 
related to time-of-flight info]

Slide5:
J/ψ production in jets in p+p -> J/ψ production within jets in p+p
LDMEs in NRQCD -> Please mention what are these?

Slide6:
CNM effects on J/ψ production at 200 GeV -> CNM effects on J/ψ 
production  [energy and collisions species not required to mention here]

Slide7:
…production at 200 GeV -> …production

Slide14:
If you could add text on each plot "J/psi suppression" and "Upsilon 
suppression", it is not clear at a glance which one is for what. At 
least for left plot.

Slide15
"First ψ(2S) measurement in Au+Au at RHIC" -> I would prefer not use 
"First" until we measure and show it at conference. It is just now a 
plan for HP program for RUn23+25. Is not it?

Please remove "period" after each bullet. In these cases, not required.

SLide16:

"Summary of heavy flavor in STAR" -> Summary of quarkonia measurement at 
STAR"
As you use the "Recent Quarkonia…" in the title slide so better to 
summarize with the same word and you are not showing open heavy flavor 
results.

J/ψ production in jets and vs jet activity:  -> "	J/ψ production in jets 
vs jet activity: "
Sequential Υ … -> Please make the same "Upsilon" symbol as your previous 
slides.


Cheers
Nihar














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