STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Barbara,

Thank you for implementing my comments.
I don't have any further comments, I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar



On 2023-06-12 14:38, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> thanks for the comments.
> I've posted a new version of the slides that include corrections based
> on your and Isaac's comments.
> Below please see my replies.
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> > Title:
> > "Recent quarkonium…" -> "Recent quarkonia…"  [Becasue you
> > present J/psi
> > and Upsilon results; it is up to you.]
>
> I'd prefer to keep it as it is, also consistent with what is on the
> conference agenda.
>
> > SLide2:
> > _color screening, regeneration. -> color screening and regeneration.
>
> Done.
>
> > _co-mover absorption, ... .  -> "co-mover absorption, etc. " or
> > "co-mover absorption, …"
> >
> > Slide3:
> > time of flight, PID (1/β) -> time-of-flight (1/β) and PID  [
> > 1/beta
> > related to time-of-flight info]
>
> Done .
>
> > Slide5:
> > J/ψ production in jets in p+p -> J/ψ production within jets in p+p
> > LDMEs in NRQCD -> Please mention what are these?
>
> Done.
>
> > Slide6:
> > CNM effects on J/ψ production at 200 GeV -> CNM effects on J/ψ
> > production  [energy and collisions species not required to mention
> > here]
>
> Done .
>
> > Slide7:
> > …production at 200 GeV -> …production
>
> Done.
>
> > Slide14:
> > If you could add text on each plot "J/psi suppression" and "Upsilon
> > suppression", it is not clear at a glance which one is for what. At
> > least for left plot.
>
> Done.
>
> > Slide15
> > "First ψ(2S) measurement in Au+Au at RHIC" -> I would prefer not
> > use
> > "First" until we measure and show it at conference. It is just now a
> > plan for HP program for RUn23+25. Is not it?
>
> I removed "first".
> Yes, it's a plan for runs 23and 25. But also we may have some
> preliminaries already now for QM.
>
> > Please remove "period" after each bullet. In these cases, not
> > required.
>
> I'd prefer to be consistent on all slides. I have periods for all
> bullets (corrected the inconsistencies that were there before).
>
> > SLide16:
> >
> > "Summary of heavy flavor in STAR" -> Summary of quarkonia
> > measurement at
> > STAR"
> > As you use the "Recent Quarkonia…" in the title slide so better to
> > summarize with the same word and you are not showing open heavy
> > flavor
> > results.
>
> Agree.
>
> > J/ψ production in jets and vs jet activity:  -> "       J/ψ
> > production in jets
> > vs jet activity: "
>
> I'm not sure if I understand the suggestion. We have measurements of
> both J/psi in jets and vs jet activity.
>
> > Sequential Υ … -> Please make the same "Upsilon" symbol as your
> > previous
> > slides.
>
>  Done.
>
> On Mon, Jun 12, 2023 at 7:11 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Barbara,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice quarkonia overview slides.
> >
> > Title:
> > "Recent quarkonium…" -> "Recent quarkonia…"  [Becasue you
> > present J/psi
> > and Upsilon results; it is up to you.]
> >
> > SLide2:
> > _color screening, regeneration. -> color screening and regeneration.
> > _co-mover absorption, ... .  -> "co-mover absorption, etc. " or
> > "co-mover absorption, …"
> >
> > Slide3:
> > time of flight, PID (1/β) -> time-of-flight (1/β) and PID  [
> > 1/beta
> > related to time-of-flight info]
> >
> > Slide5:
> > J/ψ production in jets in p+p -> J/ψ production within jets in p+p
> > LDMEs in NRQCD -> Please mention what are these?
> >
> > Slide6:
> > CNM effects on J/ψ production at 200 GeV -> CNM effects on J/ψ
> > production  [energy and collisions species not required to mention
> > here]
> >
> > Slide7:
> > …production at 200 GeV -> …production
> >
> > Slide14:
> > If you could add text on each plot "J/psi suppression" and "Upsilon
> > suppression", it is not clear at a glance which one is for what. At
> > least for left plot.
> >
> > Slide15
> > "First ψ(2S) measurement in Au+Au at RHIC" -> I would prefer not
> > use
> > "First" until we measure and show it at conference. It is just now a
> >
> > plan for HP program for RUn23+25. Is not it?
> >
> > Please remove "period" after each bullet. In these cases, not
> > required.
> >
> > SLide16:
> >
> > "Summary of heavy flavor in STAR" -> Summary of quarkonia
> > measurement at
> > STAR"
> > As you use the "Recent Quarkonia…" in the title slide so better to
> >
> > summarize with the same word and you are not showing open heavy
> > flavor
> > results.
> >
> > J/ψ production in jets and vs jet activity:  -> "       J/ψ
> > production in jets
> > vs jet activity: "
> > Sequential Υ … -> Please make the same "Upsilon" symbol as your
> > previous
> > slides.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-06-09 02:10, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Barbara Trzeciak (barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com) has submitted a
> > material
> > > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63928
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2023-06-19
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