STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar,

thanks for the comments. 

I've posted a new version of the slides that include corrections based on your and Isaac's comments.

Below please see my replies. 

Cheers,

Barbara

Title:
"Recent quarkonium…" -> "Recent quarkonia…"  [Becasue you present J/psi
and Upsilon results; it is up to you.]

I'd prefer to keep it as it is, also consistent with what is on the conference agenda.

 

SLide2:
_color screening, regeneration. -> color screening and regeneration.

Done.  

_co-mover absorption, ... .  -> "co-mover absorption, etc. " or
"co-mover absorption, …"

Slide3:
time of flight, PID (1/β) -> time-of-flight (1/β) and PID  [ 1/beta
related to time-of-flight info]

Done .

Slide5:
J/ψ production in jets in p+p -> J/ψ production within jets in p+p
LDMEs in NRQCD -> Please mention what are these?

Done.

 

Slide6:
CNM effects on J/ψ production at 200 GeV -> CNM effects on J/ψ
production  [energy and collisions species not required to mention here]

Done .

Slide7:
…production at 200 GeV -> …production

Done.

 

Slide14:
If you could add text on each plot "J/psi suppression" and "Upsilon
suppression", it is not clear at a glance which one is for what. At
least for left plot.

Done. 

Slide15
"First ψ(2S) measurement in Au+Au at RHIC" -> I would prefer not use
"First" until we measure and show it at conference. It is just now a
plan for HP program for RUn23+25. Is not it?

I removed "first".

Yes, it's a plan for runs 23and 25. But also we may have some preliminaries already now for QM.

 

Please remove "period" after each bullet. In these cases, not required.

I'd prefer to be consistent on all slides. I have periods for all bullets (corrected the inconsistencies that were there before).

 

SLide16:

"Summary of heavy flavor in STAR" -> Summary of quarkonia measurement at
STAR"
As you use the "Recent Quarkonia…" in the title slide so better to
summarize with the same word and you are not showing open heavy flavor
results.

Agree. 

 

J/ψ production in jets and vs jet activity:  -> "       J/ψ production in jets
vs jet activity: "

I'm not sure if I understand the suggestion. We have measurements of both J/psi in jets and vs jet activity. 

 

Sequential Υ … -> Please make the same "Upsilon" symbol as your previous
slides.

 Done.

On Mon, Jun 12, 2023 at 7:11 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Barbara,

Please find my comments on your nice quarkonia overview slides.

Title:
"Recent quarkonium…" -> "Recent quarkonia…"  [Becasue you present J/psi
and Upsilon results; it is up to you.]

SLide2:
_color screening, regeneration. -> color screening and regeneration.
_co-mover absorption, ... .  -> "co-mover absorption, etc. " or
"co-mover absorption, …"

Slide3:
time of flight, PID (1/β) -> time-of-flight (1/β) and PID  [ 1/beta
related to time-of-flight info]

Slide5:
J/ψ production in jets in p+p -> J/ψ production within jets in p+p
LDMEs in NRQCD -> Please mention what are these?

Slide6:
CNM effects on J/ψ production at 200 GeV -> CNM effects on J/ψ
production  [energy and collisions species not required to mention here]

Slide7:
…production at 200 GeV -> …production

Slide14:
If you could add text on each plot "J/psi suppression" and "Upsilon
suppression", it is not clear at a glance which one is for what. At
least for left plot.

Slide15
"First ψ(2S) measurement in Au+Au at RHIC" -> I would prefer not use
"First" until we measure and show it at conference. It is just now a
plan for HP program for RUn23+25. Is not it?

Please remove "period" after each bullet. In these cases, not required.

SLide16:

"Summary of heavy flavor in STAR" -> Summary of quarkonia measurement at
STAR"
As you use the "Recent Quarkonia…" in the title slide so better to
summarize with the same word and you are not showing open heavy flavor
results.

J/ψ production in jets and vs jet activity:  -> "       J/ψ production in jets
vs jet activity: "
Sequential Υ … -> Please make the same "Upsilon" symbol as your previous
slides.


Cheers
Nihar













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