STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Yan,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: you didn't mention systematics (only in the plot) in the analyses. It would be good to add some information of the systematics study and point out which are the dominant ones for both analyses. 

 - L8: v2 in isobaric collisions --> elliptic flow (v2) in the same collision systems 

 - L8: Remove "(SP)"

 - L10: Quantum chromodynamics --> Quantum Chromodynamics or quantum chromodynamics (I would suggest to use the later one to be consistent with the quark-gluon plasma 

 - L17: LHC --> the LHC

 - L22: isobaric --> Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru

 - L22: less --> smaller

 - L25: feed-down --> feed-down from the excited states 

 - L36 - 38: I would move this sentence to L22 after "depend on the size of collision systems". Then in the future you can use "isobaric collisions" to refer to the Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru collisions. 

 - L41: statistic --> statistics 

 - L42: J/psi is constructed --> The J/psi candidates are constructed 

 - L43: Need to briefly introduce TPC, TOF and BEMC (at least spell them out). Also please add references for them. 

 - L45 - 46: "Then v2 is calculated by the definition." --> Need to add a reference for the definition.  

 - L46: formula 1 --> Eq. 1

 - L47: Need to introduce EPD first

 - Figure 1: is it possible to move it to page 4, and make Figure 2 a bit smaller so you can fit them together on page 4? 

 - Equation 1: need to add some information for the symbol in this equation. Define Q2, POI, Q2, EPD, Q2 TPCW/E... 

 - L49: Fig. 1 --> Figure 1 

 - L49: Nuclear --> nuclear 

 - L54: centralitie --> centralities 

 - L63: The Nuclear modification factor RAA --> The RAA 

 - L63: Figure 2 --> Fig. 2

 - L69: Fig.3 (a) --> Figure 3 (a) 

 - L74: Figure 3(b) --> Fig. 3 (b) 

 - L80: v2 --> The J/psi v2 

 

Cheers,

Yi

  

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