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Hi Yi，

Thank you for your nice comments.

This is the new version, please have a look:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_Proceedings_YanWang_v3.pdf

best,

Yan

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发件人:"Yi Yang" <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
发送时间:2023-07-14 21:31:14 (星期五)
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Hi Yan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I have some follow-up minor comments. Don't worry about the figures. 

 - L8: in isobaric collisions --> in Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru collisions 

 - Systematics: I still don't see any description and discussion about systematics in the text. Are you planning to mention it in the text?

Cheers,

Yi

On Fri, Jul 14, 2023 at 6:11 PM <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn> wrote:

Thank you for your nice commments.

Figure 1: is it possible to move it to page 4, and make Figure 2 a bit smaller so you can fit them together on page 4?

for this commments I try , but It is hard to make fig1 and fig2 on one page. 

This is the new version:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_Proceedings_YanWang_v2.pdf

best,

Yan

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主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review

Dear Yan,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: you didn't mention systematics (only in the plot) in the analyses. It would be good to add some information of the systematics study and point out which are the dominant ones for both analyses. 

 - L8: v2 in isobaric collisions --> elliptic flow (v2) in the same collision systems 

 - L8: Remove "(SP)"

 - L10: Quantum chromodynamics --> Quantum Chromodynamics or quantum chromodynamics (I would suggest to use the later one to be consistent with the quark-gluon plasma 

 - L17: LHC --> the LHC

 - L22: isobaric --> Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru

 - L22: less --> smaller

 - L25: feed-down --> feed-down from the excited states 

 - L36 - 38: I would move this sentence to L22 after "depend on the size of collision systems". Then in the future you can use "isobaric collisions" to refer to the Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru collisions. 

 - L41: statistic --> statistics 

 - L42: J/psi is constructed --> The J/psi candidates are constructed 

 - L43: Need to briefly introduce TPC, TOF and BEMC (at least spell them out). Also please add references for them. 

 - L45 - 46: "Then v2 is calculated by the definition." --> Need to add a reference for the definition.  

 - L46: formula 1 --> Eq. 1

 - L47: Need to introduce EPD first

 - Figure 1: is it possible to move it to page 4, and make Figure 2 a bit smaller so you can fit them together on page 4? 

 - Equation 1: need to add some information for the symbol in this equation. Define Q2, POI, Q2, EPD, Q2 TPCW/E... 

 - L49: Fig. 1 --> Figure 1 

 - L49: Nuclear --> nuclear 

 - L54: centralitie --> centralities 

 - L63: The Nuclear modification factor RAA --> The RAA 

 - L63: Figure 2 --> Fig. 2

 - L69: Fig.3 (a) --> Figure 3 (a) 

 - L74: Figure 3(b) --> Fig. 3 (b) 

 - L80: v2 --> The J/psi v2 

 

Cheers,

Yi

  

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