STAR HardProbes PWG

[yanghe <yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yi,

Thank you for all the comments. I've uploaded the new version in here:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Hard-Probes-2023/Measurement-semi-inclusive-gammajet-and-hadronjet-distributions-heavy

Best,
Yang


在 2023-07-14 11:08，Yi Yang via Star-hp-l 写道：
> Hi Yang,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I only have some minor comments
> for your consideration.
>  - General: p+p --> $p$+$p$, A+A --> $A$+$A$
>  - L10: Jet --> jet
>
>  - L21 - L22: AA and pp --> $A$+$A$ and $p$+$p$  (same for L25 and 26)
>  - L21 - L24: I would suggest: move Eq.(1) after "as a formula below:"
> and add a comma after Eq.1, then change "and can be directly"  to (It
> can be directly" after Eq. 1
>  - L26: is denoted as I_AA:
>  - Eq. 2: Add a period at the end.
>  - L38: gamma_dir +jet spectrum --> The gamma-dir+jet spectrum
>  - L47: recoil jets. --> recoil jets:
>  - L52: <Npart> --> $\langle N_{part} \rangle$
>  - L60: add a reference for BSMD.
>  - L61: merge this sentence to the previous one.
>  - L63: gamma_dir --> The gamma_dir
>  - L65: reference for TSP?
>  - L69: reference for anti-kT algorithm
>  - L70: Mixed-event --> Mixed-Event
>  - L74: In final --> Finally
>            Merge this sentence to the previous one.
>  - L79: transverse energy (ET) --> ET  (you already defined it in L63)
>  - L81: remove the extra comma
>  - L89: Pythia8 MONASH --> PYTHIA-8 Monah (to be consistent with the
> plot)
>  - L90: Pythia--> PYTHIA
>  - Figure 2 caption:
>         Ratio --> Ratios
>         missed a period at the end.
>
>  - L94: Pythia--> PYTHIA
>  - L98: Pythia--> PYTHIA - Figure 3 caption: Delta_Phi --> The
> Delta_Phi
>  - Figure 4 caption: h+jet --> The h+jet - L112: Remove "And"
>  - L112: ratio --> ratios
>  - L114: Delta_Phi distributions --> The Delta_Phi distributions
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
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