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["Mioduszewski, Saskia" <mio AT comp.tamu.edu>]

Dear Shuai,

I was asked by STAR management to help review your poster.

It looks very nice, but I do have some comments below.

Best regards,

Saskia

Title:

Measurement of the Υ production in heavy-ion collisions…  ->   Y production in heavy-ion collisions…

(since “STAR detector” is in the title, it is clear that it is an experimental poster)

Abstract:

…direct signature of the QGP formation -> …direct signature of QGP formation

On top of that,   ->   Moreover,

…the QGP’s thermodynamic properties.  -> …the thermodynamic properties of the QGP.

In addition, these results are compared …  -> The results are compared ….

I would drop the last sentence about discussing physics implications.  You point out the features of the data and the comparisons, but you don’t discuss the physics implications related to your motivation (QCD force and thermodynamic properties).

Motivation:

I think each of these bullets needs a reference.  I know it will take up more space in the reference section, but these are important references for your motivation.

For example,

The first bullet:  T. Matsui, H. Satz, PLB 178 (1986) 416. 

The second bullet: L. Grandchamp et al., PRC 73 (2006) 064906. 

The third bullet:  S. Digal et al., PRD 64 (2001) 094015. 

Also, for the second bullet: 

A clearner probe compared to charmonia -> Bottomonia provides a cleaner probe compared to charmonia

 

Centrality dependence of R_AA:

suppresion  -> suppression  (in second and third bullets)

Comparisons with LHC results and theoretical calculations:

First bullet: Hit of less suppression  -> Hint of less suppression

Third bullet: Theretical -> Theoretical 

   Boltzman -> Boltzmann

Can you add a bullet about the agreement or disagreement of the models with data?

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