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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Shuai,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor suggestions and comments for your consideration. 

  - Abstract: the bar on sqrt(s) seems a bit thicker. 

  - Motivation: 

     - add reference for the picture. 

     - clearner --> clearer 

  - Signal extraction: could you please remind me what "simultaneous" means here? 

  - Centrality dependence of RAA: 

     - put references as in the "Comparisons with LHC" section 

     - Boltzman --> Boltzmann 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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