STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Shuai,

Nice poster. I only had a few comments, and realized afterward that some of them are duplicates of Saskia’s comments, so only the last one below is a unique comment for your consideration. I sign off. 

Thanks,

Isaac

> "Bottomonium: a cleaner probe..."

> "suppression" (second bullet of Centrality dependence of R_AA)

> "magnitude"; "Hint" (first bullet of "Comparisons with LHC results and theoretical calculations)

> The poster ends a bit abruptly. There's not much of a conclusion or outlook, which would be good to add. Maybe a bit less could be said about the theoretical calculations if you need extra space. 

On Aug 29, 2023, at 12:59 AM, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Shuai,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor suggestions and comments for your consideration. 

  - Abstract: the bar on sqrt(s) seems a bit thicker. 

  - Motivation: 

     - add reference for the picture. 

     - clearner --> clearer 

  - Signal extraction: could you please remind me what "simultaneous" means here? 

  - Centrality dependence of RAA: 

     - put references as in the "Comparisons with LHC" section 

     - Boltzman --> Boltzmann 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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