STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Katarzyna and Daniel,

 

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: 

     - Please add the DOE logo in the poster and put "Supported in part by:" on the top, also if possible please add the conference logo on. 

     - I see it is already quite packed, but it would be nice to add a part of the STAR detector. 

     - You don't need to write a complete sentence in a poster, so you can save some space. 

 - Data selection: 

     - It is not easy to read, all the words are too close to each other, try to rearrange it? 

 - Azimuthal correlations:  

     - I would replace "We present ...Berley group [1]" with two bullets:  (1) Data from 2014 and 2016 Au+Au collisions. (2) Based on the previous work [1]. 

     - You should decrease your number of words and enlarge the plots. 

 - Conclusions: 

     - Will you add the comments on the possibility of seeing the correlation using 2017 + 2022 data? 

Cheers,

Yi

 

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