STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yuan,

Thank you for your final slides.

Slide15:
Ratio of radial profile in central and peripheral consistent with 1 -> 
Ratio of radial profile in central and peripheral consistent with unity, 
within uncertainty

[Sorry, we missed this]

With this implemented, I sign off.

Enjoy the conference!

Best
Nihar

On 2023-09-04 12:02, suyuann--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear convenors and all,
>  please find the updated version in the drupal or the following link:
>  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_09042023_YuanSu.pdf
>
> Best regards,
> Yuan
>
> > -----Original Messages-----
> > From:"suyuann--- via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Sent Time:2023-09-04 11:59:45 (Monday)
> > To: "Diptanil Roy" <roydiptanil AT gmail.com>
> > Cc: suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "STAR HardProbes PWG"
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, "webmaster AT star.bnl.gov"
> > <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Neil,
> > Thanks for your nice comments. I'll implement most of them, and can
> > you provide me some transparent background pdf for slide13-15, just
> > as right plot on slide 13.
> > RCP_dR_MultiPlot;RCP_Pt_MultiPlot.pdf;RCP_Pt_MultiPlot can find in
> > your updated link
> > look forward to hearing from you
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Yuan
> >
> > -----Original Messages-----
> > From:"Diptanil Roy" <roydiptanil AT gmail.com>
> > Sent Time:2023-09-04 11:26:19 (Monday)
> > To: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Cc: suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "webmaster AT star.bnl.gov"
> > <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Yuan, your slides look great now.
> >
> > Please consider the following comments below:
> >
> > Slide 5: _GeV —> _GeV (on the pictures)
> > Slide 6: The mixed event method can well reproduce the combinatorial
> > background —> The mixed event method can reproduce the
> > combinatorial background well.
> > Slide 8: Isobar —> isobar
> > Slide 9: Isobar —> isobar
> > Slide 10: Isobar —> isobar
> > Slide 10: Significant D0 Raa suppression —> Significant D0 yield
> > suppression (RAA is a ratio, it shows suppression of yield)
> > Slide 13: centralz —> central
> >
> > Best of luck for the talk.
> >
> > Cheers,
> >
> > ~ Neil
> >
> > On Sun, Sep 3, 2023 at 9:56 PM suyuann--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear conveners,
> > Thank you for your nice comments. I’ve implemented all of them,
> > please find the updated version in the drupal or the following link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_09032023_YuanSu_0.pdf
> > -----Original Messages-----
> > From:"Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Sent Time:2023-09-04 04:17:08 (Monday)
> > To: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Cc: "Barbara Trzeciak" <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>,
> > "webmaster AT star.bnl.gov" <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> >
> > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Yuan,
> >
> > on slide 10: "Theoretical models that include collisional energy
> > loss are consistent with observed suppression"
> > I would say "model", as we have one prediction. And in fact at the
> > range that you're showing now we expect the radiative energy loss to
> > play a role.
> > So I would say:
> > Theoretical model that include collisional and radiative energy loss
> > are consistent with observed suppression.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Barbara
> >
> > On Sun, Sep 3, 2023 at 9:46 PM Ma, Rongrong via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Hello Yuan
> >
> > Very nice slides. I have some comments for your considerations:
> >
> > s4
> > - remove "QM 2022, Tong Liu" (Your talk is a STAR talk, so you do
> > not need to cite another STAR talk.)
> >
> > s5
> > - PID power -> PID reach
> >
> > s8
> > - in the same centrality within uncertainties
> > - Right figure: change "central" to "0-10%" (if this is true) in the
> > legend
> >
> > s9
> > - with those in Au+Au within uncertainties
> >
> > s10
> > - include collisional and radiative energy losses are
> >
> > s13
> > - Suppression of D0 meson tagged jet yield -> Hint of D0 tagged jet
> > suppression
> > - The reference for LIDO is wrong. It should be: PRC 98 064901. (Fix
> > this on other slides)
> >
> > s15
> > - LIDO model (MPI=off) describes the ratio of radial profile in data
> >
> > s16
> > - D0 behaves -> D0 seems to behave
> > - Suppression of D0 jet yield -> Hint of D0 jet suppression
> > - LIDO model underpredicts yield suppression in central collisions,
> > but can describe radial profile ratio between central and peripheral
> > collisions
> >
> > s20
> > - I suggest to replace the right figure with the one for D0 Raa vs.
> > Npart
> >
> > Best
> > Rongrong
> >
> > > On Sep 3, 2023, at 2:05 PM, suyuann--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > Hi Isaac,
> > > Thank you for your nice comments. I’ve implemented all of them,
> > > 2. thanks for concretization
> > > 3. I've tune the plots on page 3, 6, 7
> > > 6. a arrow and box are added, mixed event is used
> > > 7. (slope of T_eff) is added; and Teff consistent with each other
> > is fit result, and a strong conclusion may need strangeness hadron
> > fitting in Isobar, we may can try it later; I've redrawn it and the
> > plot has made the canvas closer to the dimensions
> > > 13. "which considering heavy quark evolution in medium with
> > collisional and radiative energy losses" is added
> > > 14. done
> > > 16. Ok and planning to verbally elaborate a bit here
> > > please find the updated version in the drupal or the following
> > link:
> > >
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_09032023_YuanSu.pdf
> > > Best regards,
> > > Yuan
> > >
> > >
> > > > -----Original Messages-----
> > > > From: "suyuann--- via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > > Sent Time: 2023-09-03 23:10:30 (Sunday)
> > > > To: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > > Cc: suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, "STAR HardProbes PWG"
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> > > > Hi Nihar,
> > > > Thanks for your the comment. The total number of charm is
> > conserved. The enhancement of Lambda_c and Ds have been observed in
> > AuAu collisions. That means more charm quarks are used to form
> > Lambda_c and Ds, then less charm will be used for D0. This charm
> > hadronization mechanism is consistent with a suppression of D0 yield
> > at low pt. But the model doesn't include this charm hadrochemistry.
> > so now we focus on the high p_T process.
> > > > Best regrads,
> > > > Yuan
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > > -----Original Messages-----
> > > > > From: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > > > Sent Time: 2023-09-03 18:13:50 (Sunday)
> > > > > To: suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn
> > > > > Cc: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,
> > webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > > > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark
> > Matter 2023 submitted for review
> > > > > Hello Yuan,
> > > > >
> > > > > Your current version looks good now.
> > > > >
> > > > > I have one comment on your slide3 and 10,
> > > > > Slide 10 figure has theory curves starting from pT > 4 GeV.
> > > > > Is there any reason for this change? Whereas you have plot with
> > AuAu
> > > > > theory curves up to 0 GeV.
> > > > >
> > > > > Probably I missed this discussion.
> > > > >
> > > > > Cheers
> > > > > Nihar
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2023-08-30 03:46, suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> > > > > > Dear Nihar,
> > > > > > Thank you for your nice comments. I’ve implemented all of
> > them,
> > > > > > please find the updated version here:
> > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_0829.pdf
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Best regards,
> > > > > > Yuan
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > -----Original Messages-----
> > > > > > > From: "Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > > > > > Sent Time: 2023-08-28 15:51:54 (Monday)
> > > > > > > To: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > > > > > Cc: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,
> > webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > > > > > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for
> > Quark Matter
> > > > > > > 2023 submitted for review
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Dear Yuan,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Thank you for posting your nice slides.
> > > > > > > I have following comments on your slides.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > No need to make text as red color for your interest.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Slide 3:
> > > > > > > _ "A significant energy loss of charm quarks in isobar
> > collisions?" ->
> > > > > > > sounds like you have already know the conclusion.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > How about combing last two bullets
> > > > > > > "What is the charge quark energy loss and binary collision
> > scaling in
> > > > > > > Isobar collisions?"
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Slide4:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > _ Title: Charm jets tagged with D^0 mesons -> Simply  " D^0
> > tagged jet
> > > > > > > in heavy-ion collisions"
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > _ Definition of Z; please check with what Diptanil has used in
> > his
> > > > > > > poster. Use the same notations.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > _ "A significant suppression of D0 tagged jet yield with lower
> > D0
> > > > > > > kinematics at RHIC energies? " -> Remove this bullet. Not
> > needed to
> > > > > > > say
> > > > > > > anything.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > _ Make "radial distribution of the D^0" expression a bit
> > bigger and
> > > > > > > move
> > > > > > > it up so that people can see from distance.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Slide5:
> > > > > > > "A diffusion of charm quarks at lower pT in Au+Au collisions
> > at sNN =
> > > > > > > 200 GeV?" -> It is not clear where do you get it. I think it
> > is not
> > > > > > > needed. Just go to your results in 15min talk. In QM, people
> > want to
> > > > > > > see
> > > > > > > the results assuming they are aware of motivation.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > _"Contribution from the underlying background is small at
> > RHIC" This
> > > > > > > is
> > > > > > > not absolutely correct. And not clear what underlying
> > background you
> > > > > > > are
> > > > > > > talking. So better to remove or rephrase this.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > _In this slide important is to highlight the kienematic range
> > of D^0
> > > > > > > that you are going to show: 1 - 10 GeV/c; That you mentioned
> > at the
> > > > > > > bottom that no one will notice. Make it bigger and highlight
> > somewhere
> > > > > > > up.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Slide7:
> > > > > > > combination background -> combinatoric background
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Slide8:
> > > > > > > _Suggestion: Less wording is better. Try to clean it up and
> > make a
> > > > > > > concise phrase or sentence
> > > > > > > _ VS -> vs [and elsewhere]
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > You can bring slide4 and 5 before Slide12, so that you can
> > tell people
> > > > > > > what you are going to tell next.
> > > > > > > Make 1-10 GeV/c kinematic slide in bold text on each slides.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Slide12:
> > > > > > > I hope you will speak a sentence on "LIDO" comparison .
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Cheers
> > > > > > > Nihar
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > On 2023-08-28 10:53, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Yuan Su (suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material
> > for a
> > > > > > > > review,
> > > > > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64968
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Deadline: 2023-09-03
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