STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yuan,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings. I have some minor comments on v3 for your consideration. 

 - L8: 40% and 40 - 80% -->  40%, and 40 - 80% 

 - L11: remove "isobar" 

 - L22-23: study the energy loss of heavy quarks -->  study the interactions of heavy quarks   (is it better?)

 - L44: I think you can remove "(B.R.)" 

 - L73: minimum bias --> MB 

 - L83: indicate --> indicates 

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Dec 5, 2023 at 12:41 PM suyuann--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar,

Thanks a lot for your nice comments, please find the update version:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66071

Best regards,
Yuan


> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送时间: 2023-12-04 11:43:37 (星期一)
> 收件人: suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn
> 抄送: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hello Yuan,
>
> Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.
>
> L7: We report the first measurements of.. -> We report the measurements
> of…
> _     transverse momentum pT -> transverse momentum (pT)
> L11:  modification factor RAA is observed -> modification factor is
> observed
> L14:  in 200 GeV Au+Au collisions ->  in √sNN = 200 GeV at Au+Au
> collisions
>   L14-17: "We show the nuclear modi- fication factor RCP of D0-tagged
> jets as a function of pT,Jet and zJet. Additionally, the radial profile
> of the D0 mesons in these tagged jets are obtained with 1 < pT,D0 < 10
> GeV/c for different centrality classes." -> Let's concise it.
> "we present the nuclear modification factor and radial profile of
> D^0-tagged jets with 1 < pT,D0 < 10 GeV/c. "
>
> L22: They are expected to suffer… ->They lose energy due to interactions
> with the medium; hence studying heavy quark in heavy-ion collisions can
> shed light on the QGP properties.
>
> L24: …modification factor RAA was …-> …modification factor, RAA, was …
> L32: you need to mention what are these pT,hadron, and pTjet are in z?
> L36:.  …jets can help constrain theoretical … -> … jets can help to
> constraint the theoretical…
>               parton mass and -> parton mass, and
> L38-40: In this proceedings,… -> These lines are needed, in stead you
> can discuss more on the topics.
> L44: are directly used -> are used
> L48: in the 200 GeV isobar collisions -> in isobar collisions at
> \sNN=200 GeV
>
> L49.  Figure  1. -> Fig.1 [Elsewhere inside the sentence; L58, L66, L71,
> L84, L89]
> L50: at 200 GeV -> at \sNN=200 GeV; Mention what is <N_bin>?
> L51:  Vertical lines and … , respectively. ->  remove this sentence here
> and include in the caption of Fig.1
> L52-53:The generally consistent indicates that the D^0… -> The D^0
> production …
>
> L55: Levy fits -> the Levy fit; "… GeV/c and plotted by dot lines. " ->
> "… GeV/c." remover rest. [data point description you can put in the
> caption]
> L56: And D0 yields in …by solid lines. -> Remove this sentence, not
> needed.
> L60:  …collisions has an obvious suppression effect … -> …collisions
> show suppression at pT > 3 GeV/c,..
> L62: Mention and cite the model predictions.
> Figure 2 caption: Blast-Wave fits -> the Blast-wave fits
> L64: inverse slope parameter Teff  -> inverse slope parameter, Teff,
> L65: in 200 GeV -> in \sNN = 200 GeV
> L67:          the singular and charm hadrons -> what is "singular" here?  This
> sentence is not clear.
> L71: present BW fit -> present the Blast-wave fit
> kinetic freeze-out temperature Tkin -> kinetic freeze-out temperature,
> Tkin,
> L71-73: This entire sentence is not needed. And Not clear .
> L75-76:       …a similar dynamic process in the bulk medium with respect to
> Au + Au collisions. -> Not clear, please rephrase
> L79:  The data sets in this work… ->  In this work, the minimum bias
> datasets are collected in Au+Au
> L80: from RHIC run year 2014. -> in the year 2014.
> L82: Rcp: mention centralities
> L87: …                the D0 tagged jet invariant yields in peripheral, but
> underestimates in central collisions. -> No figure is included in this
> proceedings. Right?
> L88: what is TAA? Mention it.
> L89: zJet: here this is different notation compared with L32; make it
> consistent
> L95: LIDO model (MPI = off) … -> The LIDO model       () describes the ratio
> of radial profile in the data.
> … mention what is MPI
> L98: To summarize, we reported … -> We report
> L102:                 while light hadrons may be -> Either remove this or mention
> "while light hadrons show negligible difference."
> L102:And the strong suppression of D0 nuclear modification factor RAA is
> -> The strong suppression of D0 nuclear modification factor is
> L104: D^0 tagged jet suppression
>
>
> Best
> Nihar
>
> On 2023-12-03 20:16, suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> > Hi Nihar,
> >
> > Thank you for your comment. Please find the update version:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66071
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Yuan
> >
> >
> >> -----原始邮件-----
> >> 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> >> 发送时间: 2023-12-04 01:09:27 (星期一)
> >> 收件人: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> >> 抄送: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> >> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark Matter 2023
> >> submitted for review
> >>
> >> Hello Yuan,
> >>
> >> Can you please add line numbers in your proceedings?
> >> It helps.
> >>
> >> Thank you
> >> Nihar
> >>
> >>
> >> On 2023-11-23 21:10, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> >> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >> >
> >> > Yuan Su (suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> >> > review,
> >> > please have a look:
> >> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66071
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