STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yuan,

Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.

L7: We report the first measurements of.. -> We report the measurements 
of…
_     transverse momentum pT -> transverse momentum (pT)
L11:  modification factor RAA is observed -> modification factor is 
observed
L14:  in 200 GeV Au+Au collisions ->  in √sNN = 200 GeV at Au+Au 
collisions
 L14-17: "We show the nuclear modi- fication factor RCP of D0-tagged 
jets as a function of pT,Jet and zJet. Additionally, the radial profile 
of the D0 mesons in these tagged jets are obtained with 1 < pT,D0 < 10 
GeV/c for different centrality classes." -> Let's concise it.
"we present the nuclear modification factor and radial profile of 
D^0-tagged jets with 1 < pT,D0 < 10 GeV/c. "

L22: They are expected to suffer… ->They lose energy due to interactions 
with the medium; hence studying heavy quark in heavy-ion collisions can 
shed light on the QGP properties.

L24: …modification factor RAA was …-> …modification factor, RAA, was …
L32: you need to mention what are these pT,hadron, and pTjet are in z?
L36:.  …jets can help constrain theoretical … -> … jets can help to 
constraint the theoretical…
                parton mass and -> parton mass, and
L38-40: In this proceedings,… -> These lines are needed, in stead you 
can discuss more on the topics.
L44: are directly used -> are used
L48: in the 200 GeV isobar collisions -> in isobar collisions at 
\sNN=200 GeV

L49.	Figure  1. -> Fig.1 [Elsewhere inside the sentence; L58, L66, L71, 
L84, L89]
L50: at 200 GeV -> at \sNN=200 GeV; Mention what is <N_bin>?
L51:	Vertical lines and … , respectively. ->  remove this sentence here 
and include in the caption of Fig.1
L52-53:The generally consistent indicates that the D^0… -> The D^0 
production …

L55: Levy fits -> the Levy fit; "… GeV/c and plotted by dot lines. " -> 
"… GeV/c." remover rest. [data point description you can put in the 
caption]
L56: And D0 yields in …by solid lines. -> Remove this sentence, not 
needed.
L60: 	…collisions has an obvious suppression effect … -> …collisions 
show suppression at pT > 3 GeV/c,..
L62: Mention and cite the model predictions.
Figure 2 caption: Blast-Wave fits -> the Blast-wave fits
L64: inverse slope parameter Teff  -> inverse slope parameter, Teff,
L65: in 200 GeV -> in \sNN = 200 GeV
L67: 		the singular and charm hadrons -> what is "singular" here?  This 
sentence is not clear.
L71: present BW fit -> present the Blast-wave fit
kinetic freeze-out temperature Tkin -> kinetic freeze-out temperature, 
Tkin,
L71-73: This entire sentence is not needed. And Not clear .
L75-76: 	…a similar dynamic process in the bulk medium with respect to 
Au + Au collisions. -> Not clear, please rephrase
L79:	The data sets in this work… ->  In this work, the minimum bias 
datasets are collected in Au+Au
L80: from RHIC run year 2014. -> in the year 2014.
L82: Rcp: mention centralities
L87: …		the D0 tagged jet invariant yields in peripheral, but 
underestimates in central collisions. -> No figure is included in this 
proceedings. Right?
L88: what is TAA? Mention it.
L89: zJet: here this is different notation compared with L32; make it 
consistent
L95: LIDO model (MPI = off) … -> The LIDO model 	() describes the ratio 
of radial profile in the data.
… mention what is MPI
L98: To summarize, we reported … -> We report
L102: 		while light hadrons may be -> Either remove this or mention 
"while light hadrons show negligible difference."
L102:And the strong suppression of D0 nuclear modification factor RAA is 
-> The strong suppression of D0 nuclear modification factor is
L104: D^0 tagged jet suppression


Best
Nihar

On 2023-12-03 20:16, suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thank you for your comment. Please find the update version:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66071
>
> Best regards,
> Yuan
>
>
> > -----原始邮件-----
> > 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 发送时间: 2023-12-04 01:09:27 (星期一)
> > 收件人: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 抄送: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yuan Su for Quark Matter 2023 
> > submitted for review
> >
> > Hello Yuan,
> >
> > Can you please add line numbers in your proceedings?
> > It helps.
> >
> > Thank you
> > Nihar
> >
> >
> > On 2023-11-23 21:10, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Yuan Su (suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
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