STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yan,

Please find below my comments on your nice proceedings.

General:
J/ψ -> make "J" italic all places
isobaric collisions -> isobar collisions

L7:We report on quarkonium (J/ψ and ψ(2S)) measurements -> We report the 
measurements of quarkonium (J/ψ and ψ(2S))
L15:	in both Helicity and Collins-Soper frames -> in both the helicity 
and the Collins-Soper frames
L15-16: a new angle -> a new insight ;
in these collisions -> in heavy-ion collisions
L21: "The anticipated dissociation …" -> give references
L24:	Alongside dissociation in the medium -> Alongside the dissociation 
in the medium
      effects -> the effects
L25: to the experimentally measured yields -> to the measured yields
L25-24: Give references
L33: J/psi -> The J/psi
L34: applying event-level -> applying the event-level
		quality cuts -> selections ["quality cuts" is a jargon, avoid it in 
writing]
"After applying event-level and track quality cuts,…" -> After applying 
good event and track selection criteria, the electron

L36:	Considering the absence of inclusive -> Due to unavailability of 
inclusive …
L40:    figure 1 -> Fig.1. [same 45 and 67]
L41: for energies of -> at \sNN=
L46: This could result from a -> This could be due to a combination…
L47:calculation ,  -> calculation,
L48: describe data with an indication of underestimation at 27 GeV and 
below.-> 	describe the data but quantitatively underestimates below \sNN 
= 27 GeV.
L51: isobaric collisions -> isobar collisions [elsewhere]
L61: is significant lower  ->                is significantly lower [same in 
L75]

L68:   of λinv between -> mention what is λinv ?

Fig.3 caption: "For measurements from heavy-ion collisions, the error…" 
-> The error… [same for Fig,2]


Best
Nihar




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