STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yan,

Thank you for implementing my comments.
I sign off.

Best
Nihar

On 2023-12-04 22:26, wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thank you for your nice comments.
> Due to space constraints, not all references are listed (those using
> their data points are prioritized)
>
> The new version can be found in this link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66082
>
> best,
> Yan
>
>
>
>
>
> > -----原始邮件-----
> > 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 发送时间: 2023-12-04 10:34:43 (星期一)
> > 收件人: "STAR HardProbes PWG" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 抄送: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 
> > 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hello Yan,
> >
> > Please find below my comments on your nice proceedings.
> >
> > General:
> > J/ψ -> make "J" italic all places
> > isobaric collisions -> isobar collisions
> >
> > L7:We report on quarkonium (J/ψ and ψ(2S)) measurements -> We report 
> > the
> > measurements of quarkonium (J/ψ and ψ(2S))
> > L15:    in both Helicity and Collins-Soper frames -> in both the helicity
> > and the Collins-Soper frames
> > L15-16: a new angle -> a new insight ;
> > in these collisions -> in heavy-ion collisions
> > L21: "The anticipated dissociation …" -> give references
> > L24:	Alongside dissociation in the medium -> Alongside the 
> > dissociation
> > in the medium
> >        effects -> the effects
> > L25: to the experimentally measured yields -> to the measured yields
> > L25-24: Give references
> > L33: J/psi -> The J/psi
> > L34: applying event-level -> applying the event-level
> >                 quality cuts -> selections ["quality cuts" is a jargon, avoid 
> > it in
> > writing]
> > "After applying event-level and track quality cuts,…" -> After 
> > applying
> > good event and track selection criteria, the electron
> >
> > L36:    Considering the absence of inclusive -> Due to unavailability of
> > inclusive …
> > L40:    figure 1 -> Fig.1. [same 45 and 67]
> > L41: for energies of -> at \sNN=
> > L46: This could result from a -> This could be due to a combination…
> > L47:calculation ,  -> calculation,
> > L48: describe data with an indication of underestimation at 27 GeV and
> > below.-> 	describe the data but quantitatively underestimates below 
> > \sNN
> > = 27 GeV.
> > L51: isobaric collisions -> isobar collisions [elsewhere]
> > L61: is significant lower  ->                is significantly lower [same in 
> > L75]
> >
> > L68:   of λinv between -> mention what is λinv ?
> >
> > Fig.3 caption: "For measurements from heavy-ion collisions, the 
> > error…"
> > -> The error… [same for Fig,2]
> >
> >
> > Best
> > Nihar
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 2023-11-25 00:08, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66082
> > >
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