STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

I almost missed this email, thanks a lot for the reminder.

The slides look very good to me, so I only have three very minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: you should remove the "period" if it is not in a complete sentence, for example two bullets in p3 (Evidence of coherent photon interactions in hadronic heavy-ion collisions).  Actually, I think you can remove all the "periods" in the presentation, but it is up to you. 

 - L9: align (~5 interaction length) to the bullets 

 - L22: di-muon --> dimuon  (to be consistent with others) 

Cheers,

Yi

On Fri, Dec 8, 2023 at 2:14 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Conveners,

Thank Zaochen for his reminder, since the abstract has been approved by
the HP PWG, it follows that the talk should also be approved by HP, so I
re-upload my slides to HP PWG. I apologize for this oversight on my
part.

Looking forward to your comments and suggestions.

Best regards,
Ziyang

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