STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Ziyang,

No problem, I will push it to STARtalks, and others in the PWG can give comments while it’s at that level. I also have some small comments for your consideration below. With them addressed, I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

The STAR logo should be on each slide.

3. Should this really be an Upsilon above each plot (e.g. UpsilonUpsilon -> e+e-)? Or a gamma?

5. 

Maybe I'm missing something, but I don't see why the "pT broadening is proposed..." is a subbullet of the first bullet.

You say the Zha et al with EM does much better than without EM, but this is only really true in the lowest mass bin, right? Would it be good to clarify that/explain why it is, on this slide?

People may also wonder what the solid and dashed lines are. It could be good to add somewhere on the slide that they're fits.

11. You say "focus on the J/psi (2.9 < M < 3.2 GeV/c^2) and high mass region (3.2 < M < 10 GeV/c^2)", but neither plot goes up to 10 GeV. Do you have a version that does go that high? Or is it necessary to say this here? Or maybe add "...10 GeV/c^2, shown later)"?

12. You say it's consistent with dielectron channel results, and I mostly agree, but the dielectron mid-peripheral (blue) points do seem to be systematically below the dimuon channel RAA. Maybe there's an overall TAA uncertainty not shown which is large? Or are my eyes not doing a good job at calculating significance?

14. "No obvious centrality dependence of low-pT yields"?

17. It would be good to make the text on the plot on the right (e.g. "Au+Au 200GeV @STAR") white so it shows up a bit better against the colored data points.

19. "Excess"

On Dec 10, 2023, at 4:43 PM, zli1 via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Conveners,

I apologize for the delay in submitting my materials. As the conference will begin tomorrow, and my talk is scheduled for December 14th, I am inquiring whether it would be possible to push my presentation to STAR talk.

Thank you for considering my request.

Best,
Ziyang

On 2023-12-09 14:03, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:

Hi Yi,
Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version.

- General: you should remove the "period" if it is not in a complete
sentence, for example two bullets in p3 (Evidence of coherent photon
interactions in hadronic heavy-ion collisions).  Actually, I think you
can remove all the "periods" in the presentation, but it is up to you.

Done, you are right, I removed all the periods.

- L9: align (~5 interaction length) to the bullets

Done

- L22: di-muon --> dimuon  (to be consistent with others)

Done
Best,
Ziyang
On 2023-12-08 18:38, Yi Yang wrote:

Hi Ziyang,
I almost missed this email, thanks a lot for the reminder.
The slides look very good to me, so I only have three very minor
comments for your consideration.
- General: you should remove the "period" if it is not in a complete
sentence, for example two bullets in p3 (Evidence of coherent photon
interactions in hadronic heavy-ion collisions).  Actually, I think you
can remove all the "periods" in the presentation, but it is up to you.
- L9: align (~5 interaction length) to the bullets
- L22: di-muon --> dimuon  (to be consistent with others)
Cheers,
Yi
On Fri, Dec 8, 2023 at 2:14 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Conveners,
Thank Zaochen for his reminder, since the abstract has been approved
by
the HP PWG, it follows that the talk should also be approved by HP,
so I
re-upload my slides to HP PWG. I apologize for this oversight on my
part.
Looking forward to your comments and suggestions.
Best regards,
Ziyang
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