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  • From: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
  • To: Gabe Dale-Gau <gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>
  • Cc: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
  • Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Gabriel Dale-Gau for HP2024 submitted for review
  • Date: Thu, 16 May 2024 09:32:37 +0530

Hello Gabe,

Thank you for implementing my comments.
It reads good in the current form. I sign off.


I intentionally left details out on the constituent cut and jet radius
in the original draft, because I didn’t want to clutter the abstract
with too much detail. I can leave them in if you prefer. Also I would
prefer a more nuanced discussion of the effects of varying jet-R, but
I feel this is also too much for the abstract. For now I put one
sentence in justifying the method, but I feel it is over simplified,
and would be better as a discussion in the talk. Let me know if you
have any other input on how much to include in terms of discussing
“why it is important”.

This can be addressed in your presentation. So never mind now.

Best
Nihar


On 2024-05-15 01:36, Gabe Dale-Gau wrote:
Hello Nihar,

Thank you for your comments.

I have updated the submission page with a new version of the abstract.
Individual responses to your comments are listed below.

Thanks,

Gabe

1_ baryon-to-meson yield ratios -> baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron
yield ratios [Need to mention this because to avoid "in-jet
baryon-to-meson ratio" and "baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron yield
ratio"]

Good point. Implemented as suggested.

2_ jet-track correlation -> jet-charged hadron correlation or simply
"jet-hadron correlation"

Implemented as suggested.

3_ "…jet radii and jet constituent pT selections. " -> You need to
pointed out that this abstract will cover results from pT>2.0GeV/c and
what jet R. Which is new and important for this measurement. You need
also to highlight why it is important to have a measurement pT>2 GeV/c
and different jet R?
Otherwise, this abstract reads similar to previous years' abstract.

Updated to the following:

“these in-jet ratios are studied as a function of jet radii, R $=
0.2, 0.3, 0.4$, and jet constituent $p_{\rm{T}}$ selections,
$p^{\rm{const}}_{\rm{T}} > 2.0$ GeV/$c$, $3.0$ GeV/$c$. Varying the
jet radius and constituent $p_{\rm{T}}$ selection allows us to probe
jets with different levels of QGP interaction.”

I intentionally left details out on the constituent cut and jet radius
in the original draft, because I didn’t want to clutter the abstract
with too much detail. I can leave them in if you prefer. Also I would
prefer a more nuanced discussion of the effects of varying jet-R, but
I feel this is also too much for the abstract. For now I put one
sentence in justifying the method, but I feel it is over simplified,
and would be better as a discussion in the talk. Let me know if you
have any other input on how much to include in terms of discussing
“why it is important”.

On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 7:13 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
wrote:

Hello Gabe,

Please find my comments on your abstract.

1_ baryon-to-meson yield ratios -> baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron
yield ratios [Need to mention this because to avoid "in-jet
baryon-to-meson ratio" and "baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron yield
ratio"]

2_ jet-track correlation -> jet-charged hadron correlation or simply

"jet-hadron correlation"

3_ "…jet radii and jet constituent pT selections. " -> You need to

pointed out that this abstract will cover results from pT>2.0GeV/c
and
what jet R. Which is new and important for this measurement. You
need
also to highlight why it is important to have a measurement pT>2
GeV/c
and different jet R?
Otherwise, this abstract reads similar to previous years' abstract.

Best
Nihar

On 2024-05-10 19:44, Gabe Dale-Gau via Star-hp-l wrote:
Dear HP-conveners,

I would like to highlight the final sentence of this abstract, "
These
in-jet ratios are studied as a function of jet radii and jet
constituent pT selecitons. ", to point out the difference between
what
I am submitting this year and what I presented last year. This
year,
with a more developed method for correlated background removal, I
plan
to present results for constituent pT > 2.0 GeV/c, and using the
increase in statistics that comes along with this jet sample, I
plan
to present a radial study of the p/pi ratios as well.

Thanks,

Gabe

On Fri, May 10, 2024 at 8:40 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Gabriel Dale-Gau (gdaleg2 AT uic.edu) has submitted a material for a
review,
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