STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Gabe,

The abstract is looking very good now. I agree that my comment about the change to “...correlations using identified particles…” would have been misleading, but the change from “alongside” to “and” makes it read okay to me now. Thanks for addressing my comments. I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

On May 14, 2024, at 16:06, Gabe Dale-Gau via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Nihar,

Thank you for your comments.

I have updated the submission page with a new version of the abstract. Individual responses to your comments are listed below.

Thanks,

Gabe

1_ baryon-to-meson yield ratios -> baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron
yield ratios [Need to mention this because to avoid "in-jet
baryon-to-meson ratio" and "baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron yield
ratio"]

 

Good point. Implemented as suggested.

2_ jet-track correlation -> jet-charged hadron correlation or simply
"jet-hadron correlation"

Implemented as suggested.

3_ "…jet radii and jet constituent pT selections. " -> You need to
pointed out that this abstract will cover results from pT>2.0GeV/c and
what jet R. Which is new and important for this measurement. You need
also to highlight why it is important to have a measurement pT>2 GeV/c
and different jet R?
Otherwise, this abstract reads similar to previous years' abstract.

 

Updated to the following:

 

“these in-jet ratios are studied as a function of jet radii, R $= 0.2, 0.3, 0.4$, and jet constituent $p_{\rm{T}}$ selections, $p^{\rm{const}}_{\rm{T}} > 2.0$ GeV/$c$, $3.0$ GeV/$c$. Varying the jet radius and constituent $p_{\rm{T}}$ selection allows us to probe jets with different levels of QGP interaction.”

 

I intentionally left details out on the constituent cut and jet radius in the original draft, because I didn’t want to clutter the abstract with too much detail. I can leave them in if you prefer. Also I would prefer a more nuanced discussion of the effects of varying jet-R, but I feel this is also too much for the abstract. For now I put one sentence in justifying the method, but I feel it is over simplified, and would be better as a discussion in the talk. Let me know if you have any other input on how much to include in terms of discussing “why it is important”.

On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 7:13 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gabe,

Please find my comments on your abstract.

1_ baryon-to-meson yield ratios -> baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron 
yield ratios [Need to mention this because to avoid "in-jet 
baryon-to-meson ratio" and "baryon-to-meson inclusive hadron yield 
ratio"]

2_ jet-track correlation -> jet-charged hadron correlation or simply 
"jet-hadron correlation"

3_ "…jet radii and jet constituent pT selections. " -> You need to 
pointed out that this abstract will cover results from pT>2.0GeV/c and 
what jet R. Which is new and important for this measurement. You need 
also to highlight why it is important to have a measurement pT>2 GeV/c 
and different jet R?
Otherwise, this abstract reads similar to previous years' abstract.


Best
Nihar

On 2024-05-10 19:44, Gabe Dale-Gau via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear HP-conveners,
> 
> I would like to highlight the final sentence of this abstract, " These
> in-jet ratios are studied as a function of jet radii and jet
> constituent pT selecitons. ", to point out the difference between what
> I am submitting this year and what I presented last year. This year,
> with a more developed method for correlated background removal, I plan
> to present results for constituent pT > 2.0 GeV/c, and using the
> increase in statistics that comes along with this jet sample, I plan
> to present a radial study of the p/pi ratios as well.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gabe
> 
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