STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Neil,

I’m happy with this, and sign off. “help us put significant constraints” is grammatically correct (although maybe Nihar meant “help us in putting significant constraints” which would also work) so I will push it to STAR-talks.

Thanks,

Isaac

On May 14, 2024, at 15:09, Diptanil Roy <roydiptanil AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Nihar, if possible, I would like to keep the present version. Thank you.

On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 7:13 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Diptanil,

I have only a minor comment on your nice abstract. With this implemented 
I sign off.

L15: help us put significant constraints -> help us putting significant 
constraints

Best
Nihar

On 2024-05-14 03:31, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Isaac, thank you for your thorough comments on the abstract. An
> updated version is now available at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_2024_v3_Diptanil_1.pdf.
> 
> Please find some inline comments below:
> 
>> 11. "of different resolution parameters"? But I recommend removing
>> "of different resolutions" anyway.
> 
> I want to keep this because the measurements at different jet cone
> sizes are new for Hard Probes.
> 
>> 13. You do introduce a lot of observables here without definition
>> (nuclear modification factors, fragmentation function, generalized
>> angularities, radial profile, ...). I understand that space is
>> limited, you're synthesizing a lot of work, and Hard Probes is a
>> niche/expert audience, but wanted to point it out in case you can
>> think of a compact way to address this point. You might be able to
>> save space by changing the comment about the HFT to a more generic
>> "along with subsystem improvements to the STAR experiment," or
>> something like that; also the end of that sentence is a bit
>> redundant with the last sentence of the abstract and could be
>> combined somehow.
> 
> I added formulae for the fragmentation function and angularities. I
> think that's the simplest way to add more information about the
> observables without going over the word limit. Let me know if you have
> any suggestions on if I can improve it.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> On Mon, May 13, 2024 at 4:37 PM Mooney, Isaac
> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> wrote:
> 
>> Hi Neil,
>> 
>> Good job combining different analyses to make a coherent abstract. I
>> have a few small comments below.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Isaac
>> 
>> 3. Remove "medium"
>> 
>> 4. This sentence is a bit of a run-on. Maybe: "...or through
>> medium-induced gluon bremsstrahlung, which is the dominant mode of
>> energy loss for gluons and light quarks. Theoretical calculations
>> predict that at low transverse momentum, this radiative energy loss
>> is suppressed for heavy quarks such as charm and bottom."
>> 
>> 8. "low-p_{T} charm-tagged"
>> 
>> 9. Remove "closer"
>> 
>> 11. "of different resolution parameters"? But I recommend removing
>> "of different resolutions" anyway.
>> 
>> 13. You do introduce a lot of observables here without definition
>> (nuclear modification factors, fragmentation function, generalized
>> angularities, radial profile, ...). I understand that space is
>> limited, you're synthesizing a lot of work, and Hard Probes is a
>> niche/expert audience, but wanted to point it out in case you can
>> think of a compact way to address this point. You might be able to
>> save space by changing the comment about the HFT to a more generic
>> "along with subsystem improvements to the STAR experiment," or
>> something like that; also the end of that sentence is a bit
>> redundant with the last sentence of the abstract and could be
>> combined somehow.
>> 
>> On May 13, 2024, at 03:28, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear Neil,
>> 
>> Thanks a lot for the updated version. It looks great to me. I don't
>> have any further comments on it.
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>> 
>> On Sat, May 11, 2024 at 5:05 AM Diptanil Roy
>> <roydiptanil AT gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Yi, thank you for your comments. I have now uploaded a v2 with
>> the suggested changes. Especially, the last paragraph has been
>> shortened a bit.
>> 
>> Here's the link to v2:
>> 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_2024_v2_Diptanil.pdf
>> [1]
>> 
>> Please let me know if you have any more comments.
>> 
>> Thank you.
>> 
>> On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 10:35 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear Neil,
>> 
>> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some minor
>> comments/suggestions for your consideration.
>> - L1: heavy ion --> heavy-ion
>> - L11 - L15: it reads a bit long to me , I would merge them
>> together like: In this talk, we present several measurements of jet
>> related observables for D0(cu ̄) meson tagged jets in Au+Au
>> collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV collected by the STAR experiment,
>> including the yields and nuclear modification factors as functions
>> of pT,Jet, fragmentation function, and generalized angularities.
>> (probably not better than yours, so it is totally up to you.)
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>> 
>> On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 12:16 AM Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear conveners and HP-PWG,
>> 
>> Please find my contribution for HP 2024 below. I plan on presenting
>> a summary of all charm tagged jets measurement (spectra,
>> angularities, jet cone size dependence etc) at STAR.
>> 
>> Please let me know if you have any comments or questions.
>> 
>> Thank you.
>> 
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>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/67700
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